Critiques - general
A place to read and critique members' work. NB: some of the best critiquing goes on in "Groups". Either sign up to a group that suits you - or set one up yourself. (Click "Create New" in Groups.)
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How to give effective feedback
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I joined Yahoo Answers when i first started writing but it's all
kids on ...View
Latest poster: crimefan 3 days ago
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How to seek an effective critique
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Hi, whoever reads this,
the link given in the first post here (and I ...View
Latest poster: Rob 7 days ago
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Submission Guidelines (IMPORTANT)
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Yes, Spangles. Larger than life. They lived it to the full. I read
that ...View
Latest poster: Veek 4 months ago
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The kite - a short story
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Hi PJ
I quess - too - utterly - without doubt - the MOST - AMERICAN ...View
Latest poster: bikerjob 8 hours ago
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Aeanon: Chapter 1 - A messenger arrives
Started By Stormbride |
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Hi Stormbride - from this, I can tell that you have read a lot of
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Latest poster: Elysia 17 hours ago
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Only in Hollywood
Started By Jane |
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Hi Jane
Thank you for your comment on my chapter. Much appreciated as ...View
Latest poster: MinxieAD 23 hours ago
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Chapter 7
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thanks guys, very helpfulView
Latest poster: tono 23 hours ago
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Entwined ~ Chapter 1 (in need of a lot of advice if anyone is up to it)
Started By MinxieAD |
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Hi there
Not much good at giving out criticism as I am pretty useless ...View
Latest poster: Jane 1 day ago
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My first unpublished MS - Adam's Dilemma
Started By sevensins |
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John Costello - thank you for your encouragement and kind comments.
I have ...View
Latest poster: sevensins 1 day ago
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The Assyrian Secret - Prologue for a novel I am working on.
Started By ManssourBinAli |
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Hello,
Thank you for your comment! Actually, the edited version of ...View
Latest poster: ManssourBinAli 2 days ago
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Chapter 1- re-worked
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thanks guys, really appreciate your feedbackView
Latest poster: tono 2 days ago
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Kingdoms of Fate/The Assyrian Secret (title options) - Novel I am working on.
Started By ManssourBinAli |
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Dear All,
I hope you are fine and that, so far, 2012 has been a ...View
Latest poster: ManssourBinAli 3 days ago
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The Man In The White Suit.
Started By zoolane |
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OK first time for everything, Thailand hmm. Thank you for comment
about ...View
Latest poster: zoolane 3 days ago
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More from the debt collector book.....
Started By Neil Evans |
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A very funny and engaging story - I really liked these two
characters ...View
Latest poster: EleanorW 3 days ago
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Footing the Bill - 250 word Flash
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Blinkers - a better and more accurate word ?
Mothers, and fathers, choose ...View
Latest poster: bikerjob 3 days ago
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The Encounter 3 - the man's story
Started By EleanorW |
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I quite like this third one. It ties everything together with a
nice hook ...View
Latest poster: stephenterry 3 days ago
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Advice from Crime/Mystery Fans?
Started By crimefan |
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I liked both plots but preferred the first one. I like the back
story of ...View
Latest poster: MinxieAD 4 days ago
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Short story - A night in Lyon
Started By Pj |
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Pj, Interesting and entertaining read although not dramatic in my
eyes. ...View
Latest poster: Old Fat Prop 4 days ago
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Waiting... chapter 1 pages 5-10
Started By Sassie |
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Hey again, It's hard to revise on a computor screen, words look
different, ...View
Latest poster: crimefan 4 days ago
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Short (1500 words) story, need your feedback :)
Started By AJ |
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Thanks for taking the time to help guys :)View
Latest poster: AJ 4 days ago
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Chapter 1
Started By tono |
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I agree with Minxie, sometime if you try edit while writing,it get
to be ...View
Latest poster: zoolane 4 days ago
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The Encounter - the woman's story
Started By EleanorW |
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Cool - break a leg!View
Latest poster: EleanorW 4 days ago
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Violet Awakening - Chapter One; Complete re-write!
Started By Tommo |
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Hi, Sassie- sorry about the size of the writing - I copied and
pasted it ...View
Latest poster: Tommo 4 days ago
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Samui Secrets Chapter 4
Started By stephenterry |
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Hi TfX - good points, and I'm not adverse to suggested change. ...View
Latest poster: stephenterry 5 days ago
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Opening of my proposed story about uni
Started By Johncjg |
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Looking back ‘fondly’ is not a good start – good for the ...View
Latest poster: bikerjob 7 days ago
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