Critiques - general

A place to read and critique members' work. NB: some of the best critiquing goes on in "Groups". Either sign up to a group that suits you - or set one up yourself. (Click "Create New" in Groups.)
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Sticky Topic How to give effective feedback
Started By The WordCloud
108 9860
Gnashed myself into an absolute pit trying to give 'positive' criticism. ...View
Latest poster: Mat 2 months ago
Sticky Topic How to seek an effective critique
Started By The WordCloud
59 9317
Gentle comment: If you are seeking critques you need to also ...View
Latest poster: Barb 1 year ago
Normal Topic Looking for beta readers?
Started By lukem
1 71
Can you post some, .e.g no more than 2000 words here?View
Latest poster: Barny 17 days ago
Normal Topic Competition entry
Started By katie
8 122
Sea green-Basically boys never pay attention to Emily so her seeing then ...View
Latest poster: katie 21 days ago
Normal Topic Ziff - A picture book
Started By RobertScott
6 76
Thank you very much.View
Latest poster: RobertScott 29 days ago
Normal Topic - The Runaway Boy - 1st version of true life short story
Started By Kane Anderson Stone
10 289
This is true, but like I said still writing my fictional novel, titled The ...View
Latest poster: Kane Anderson Stone 1 month ago
Normal Topic First 2 chapters of Komplex 08
Started By Keith
14 241
Thanks Mike thats a great help I have taken your advice on board, as well ...View
Latest poster: Keith 1 month ago
Normal Topic "The Instance Pigg" - request for critique (NB: Contains some swear words)
Started By bdcharles
15 853
Hi bdcharles, Original and fresh, and I like the idea of the pig(g). I ...View
Latest poster: JD 1 month ago
Normal Topic New opening, seeking feedback!!
Started By Leon
6 223
Hi Leon, As others have said, this flows well and that means ...View
Latest poster: mike202 1 month ago
Normal Topic Where to find readers?
Started By Gemstar
5 154
I´ve been on www.scribophile.com for a few months and I can recomend ...View
Latest poster: Donna 1 month ago
Normal Topic If 'reading group fiction' is your thing, would you read on?
Started By Hil
25 405
Thanks, Leon and Philippa. I think my conclusion is that this is ...View
Latest poster: Hil 3 months ago
Normal Topic Relieving Stress!! Short story - would love some feedback.
Started By leon
20 297
Hi John, Thans for looking at this. I do see corrections that need ...View
Latest poster: Autonomous 3 months ago
Normal Topic Fever Bright
Started By babblefish2
4 206
First of all, i love the flow of the writing. It feels as though it ...View
Latest poster: Leon 3 months ago
Normal Topic beta readers and critique needed
Started By jmcelhaney
1 239
If you don't get any takers, you might want to put an excerpt up here so ...View
Latest poster: Kate 3 months ago
Normal Topic New opening. What do you think?
Started By cookiemonster
6 310
I really like the feel of this. I like to feel disorientated from time to ...View
Latest poster: leon 3 months ago
Normal Topic The Move
Started By fudgetusk
7 281
Hey fudgetusk - what sort of critique are you looking for? It is a ...View
Latest poster: fudgetusk 3 months ago
Normal Topic Flash-fiction. I'd be interested in your thoughts
Started By JimB
11 440
The above post is an error. This is the real post: ...View
Latest poster: fudgetusk 3 months ago
Normal Topic Some, er, advertising copy...
Started By secondtime
10 333
Weird stuff for this site. :) You should see my stuff. Engaging? ...View
Latest poster: fudgetusk 3 months ago
Normal Topic RE: RE: The Window Boy - Arran's Magic Kingdom - Re-edited - John Alty > Reply #3 - Barny > Reply #4
Started By Kane Anderson Stone
0 144
Original Post As Giselle says, copy from your Open Office document ...View
Latest poster: Kane Anderson Stone 3 months ago
Normal Topic RE: The Window Boy - Arran's Magic Kingdom - Re-edited - John Alty > Reply #3
Started By Kane Anderson Stone
3 186
As Giselle says, copy from your Open Office document and paste into a ...View
Latest poster: Barny 3 months ago
Normal Topic Year of the Cat - Chapter 1 part 1
Started By Janey1966
2 167
What L says. The temptation to over-explain is almost irresistable at ...View
Latest poster: John Alty 3 months ago
Normal Topic - The Rift - begining of a short story
Started By Kane Anderson Stone
0 155
The Rift By Kaiden G. Stone ...View
Latest poster: Kane Anderson Stone 3 months ago
Normal Topic The Window Boy - Arran's Magic Kingdom - Re-edited
Started By Kane Anderson Stone
17 226
Did you say it was for older children? They love to be scared! Erm, ...View
Latest poster: Kane Anderson Stone 3 months ago
Normal Topic 3rd opening update - please continue to give feedback - many thanks
Started By cookiemonster
10 212
Hi again cookiemonster, This has definitely improved in terms of ...View
Latest poster: TheWeyMan 3 months ago
Normal Topic Beta Testing: Sci-fi RPG
Started By babblefish2
0 157
It began in the cradle, the first world, long ago. There ...View
Latest poster: babblefish2 3 months ago