Critiques - general

A place to read and critique members' work. NB: some of the best critiquing goes on in "Groups". Either sign up to a group that suits you - or set one up yourself. (Click "Create New" in Groups.)
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Sticky Topic How to seek an effective critique
Started By The WordCloud
58 7328
Indiana, you need to post this in a thread of your own. Try Forum ...View
Latest poster: Seagreen 1 month ago
Sticky Topic How to give effective feedback
Started By The WordCloud
103 8268
Richard, I have made suggestions of what you might do but I ...View
Latest poster: BellaM 11 months ago
Normal Topic Chapter One- The Braille Club. Feedback please if you have a few moments to spare :)
Started By Juls
17 74
A BRAILLE PARTY, MARBELLA, 10 YEARS AGO. The host enters the ...View
Latest poster: Juls 53 mins ago
Normal Topic Into the blue
Started By katie
13 108
Hi Katie, don't feel embarrassed. Everyone has to start somewhere, and ...View
Latest poster: Catasshe 2 hours ago
Normal Topic Would you... ?
Started By succinct
1 14
I think you've got some good ideas in this and the idea of her having to ...View
Latest poster: Pinkbelt75 3 hours ago
Normal Topic Short story (2455 words)
Started By Everlasting
0 11
Hey guys, hope everyone's having a good weekend. I've spent about three ...View
Latest poster: Everlasting 4 hours ago
Normal Topic A World Where No One Weeps Critiques Please!
Started By Aigerim
6 142
I made a big list of things I enjoyed or thought could be improved with ...View
Latest poster: AceOfAllTrades 2 days ago
Normal Topic Feedback please (729 words)
Started By fka ally
4 54
Hey, Ally! Sorry if this goes haywire, but I'll give it my best shot. ...View
Latest poster: AceOfAllTrades 2 days ago
Normal Topic Hunter, Chapter 1, 707 words, feedback please :)
Started By Everlasting
34 254
Well done for taking it all on board. It's bloomin' hard sometimes to hear ...View
Latest poster: Hilly 3 days ago
Normal Topic Making technical issues entertaining
Started By John Alty
6 52
Thanks OFP and JD. I do like technical detail when I read - I ...View
Latest poster: John Alty 3 days ago
Normal Topic Just a poem I've been working on
Started By MosquitoFB6
3 70
I want to make it clear that the work is not autobiography View
Latest poster: MosquitoFB6 3 days ago
Normal Topic Hazel Hill Woods
Started By Mashie Niblick
6 79
Wow, this is good. I really like the ending. I got a real sense ...View
Latest poster: MosquitoFB6 5 days ago
Normal Topic Fine thanks.
Started By Chico
4 93
When I try, fear falls like a curtain. might be better If I ...View
Latest poster: Mashie Niblick 9 days ago
Normal Topic Mozzie's Beta Barn - Critiques Needed
Started By MosquitoFB6
0 41
Hi everyone. This is just an an announcement to let you know that I've ...View
Latest poster: MosquitoFB6 10 days ago
Normal Topic 2514 Words: Thoughts? (Experimental)[deleted previous topic]
Started By Seek Guidance
2 61
SG - I wrote a detailed post earlier and it's disappeared! I'll try and ...View
Latest poster: Squidge 14 days ago
Normal Topic Welcome to Serconea - Chapter 1 Feedback Requested
Started By A.R. Carpenter
36 145
Dear ARC, it's this type of plot snippet "So Julie has the starring ...View
Latest poster: A.R. Carpenter 18 days ago
Normal Topic 'Jaundice', first short story, would love your thoughts! (2300 words)
Started By Blaze Longhorn
3 52
You're welcome. Look forward to reading some more.View
Latest poster: Hilly 19 days ago
Normal Topic A poem. Does it speak to you? (Or is it too vague?)
Started By Maggiesue Alexa
18 88
Thank you, everybody. Because I couldn't find the 'Watch Topic' button the ...View
Latest poster: Maggiesue Alexa 20 days ago
Normal Topic Would love some feedback on my opening pages (Adult Fantasy)
Started By Erkembald
24 198
yes... the rest of the book. Ain't no mountain high enough, as the old ...View
Latest poster: Erkembald 22 days ago
Normal Topic Character Development in short chapter
Started By Ben
5 57
Thanks for the feedback, the mc is kenny so Ive overhauled the passage to ...View
Latest poster: Ben 22 days ago
Normal Topic Looking for some feedback, please! (Very new to this!)
Started By Maggiesue Alexa
18 119
Hi JtF - I think, in a funny sort of way 'tepid water' was just what I ...View
Latest poster: Maggiesue Alexa 22 days ago
Normal Topic Monday Morning Blues - feedback please
Started By Vox Populi
11 79
Thank you to all for responding to my request for assistance. I will ...View
Latest poster: Vox Populi 24 days ago
Normal Topic Feedback request - Sci-Fi short story 1,070 words
Started By Iridium Dawn
11 109
Thanks, Hilly.View
Latest poster: Iridium Dawn 1 month ago
Normal Topic Feedback request for first 3000 words of my sci-fi novel
Started By Nic
17 205
Hi Stephen, Thanks for your comment. I am glad to hear that you ...View
Latest poster: Nic 1 month ago
Normal Topic Football Action Scene - Boxing Day
Started By Paris Paul
2 104
Hi Paul As a non football lover I'm not sure I'm qualified to say ...View
Latest poster: Kate 1 month ago