Critiques - general

A place to read and critique members' work. NB: some of the best critiquing goes on in "Groups". Either sign up to a group that suits you - or set one up yourself. (Click "Create New" in Groups.)
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Normal Topic Google & I
Started By T.W Duke 		16 157
Ever hear of the band 'Pop will eat itself?' 'nough said :-)View
Latest poster: Noodledoodle 1 month ago
Normal Topic Synopsis of R+J
Started By katie 		14 102
Hi Katie, watch Black Swan - it's awesome, it's filmed like you are right ...View
Latest poster: Jen 1 month ago
Normal Topic Opening for a new project.
Started By AlanP 		44 200
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Latest poster: BP 1 month ago
Normal Topic one of the chapters in my book- i'm just looking for feedback, if you've got negative feedback then all the better :)
Started By MrNyanhete 		17 230
sound advice BP, that would translate to about 10-2 pages, that sounds ...View
Latest poster: MrNyanhete 1 month ago
Normal Topic Letter to a Princess (Tongue-in-cheek, low fantasy, short story - looking for both positives and negatives)
Started By TheSweet 		9 51
I thought the comedy worked well and I liked your main character. Must ...View
Latest poster: Pj 1 month ago
Normal Topic No Come Back chapter 10.
Started By stephenterry 		7 66
Thank you Stephen and yours too.In fact when I write I try to impress ...View
Latest poster: katie 2 months ago
Normal Topic The Turing Test (Short Story, 2.200 words)
Started By Philippa 		11 94
Hi Eleanor, Liam, and PJ Thanks again for your comments. Eleanor - I ...View
Latest poster: Philippa 2 months ago
Normal Topic End of story experiment (2220 words)
Started By Eli d’Elbée 		10 90
Hi Eli, I'm a little lost as to the premise of this piece and how it ...View
Latest poster: Pj 2 months ago
Normal Topic Competition entry - a ruthless edit required!
Started By Tenacityflux 		9 75
Great. Well, again very good luck.View
Latest poster: Philippa 2 months ago
Normal Topic My Grandfathers clock.
Started By Tenacityflux 		10 61
Yes. I am trying out the "virtual drawer" also. I hear good things happen ...View
Latest poster: Philippa 2 months ago
Normal Topic Roadkill - YA
Started By Dolly 		3 46
Thanks Eli - really helpful points and will use all of them! Yes she is ...View
Latest poster: Dolly 2 months ago
Normal Topic Chapter 1 Exe Onus
Started By Jack 		14 139
Apologies. No offence intended. I perhaps should have been more aware of ...View
Latest poster: Jack 2 months ago
Normal Topic Borrowed Wings
Started By Solitiaire 		12 124
Love this - it drew me straight in! Sets the scene brilliantly, and I like ...View
Latest poster: Dolly 2 months ago
Normal Topic Short story - Twilight zone-ish - advice needed
Started By AJ 		4 35
Thanks Stephen, I'll mull what you've said over. Thanks. Great ...View
Latest poster: AJ 2 months ago
Normal Topic Exe Onus Ch. 2
Started By Jack 		3 48
I haven't read the guide-lines for submission yet mate to be fair. Didn't ...View
Latest poster: Jack 2 months ago
Normal Topic Only in Hollywood - chapter 6
Started By Jane 		4 26
Glad it helped, it's so often a wood for the tree scenario where you just ...View
Latest poster: Tenacityflux 2 months ago
Normal Topic ABNA Pitch - first major rewrite (edited again!)
Started By EleanorW 		27 160
Thanks Philippa, Tenacity and Liam. I'm going to take a break from this. ...View
Latest poster: EleanorW 2 months ago
Normal Topic How we came to New York
Started By Tenacityflux 		9 43
Yes, I confess yet again, there are a few elements of Saskia's life taken ...View
Latest poster: Tenacityflux 2 months ago
Normal Topic Short Story: Postcards of the Hanging (2,000 words)
Started By Philippa 		22 81
Hi Liam Thanks for your input (NB: I don't think you are rubbish ...View
Latest poster: Philippa 2 months ago
Normal Topic More sub-chapters from my novel...Please read and criticise at will.
Started By John Costello 		10 76
Malcolm. Couldn't agree more! When I look back to what I was writing ...View
Latest poster: John Costello 2 months ago
Normal Topic Ch.11 My Songs Are Full of Venom
Started By Wendy 		6 88
Not quite sure what happened/changed to make this pop up again. Enjoyed ...View
Latest poster: Athelstone 2 months ago
Normal Topic No Come Back - a new plan for Mitch *& introducing Tigger...*
Started By stephenterry 		10 82
Thanks Eli - as you say it's a moving target and chapter one has been ...View
Latest poster: stephenterry 2 months ago
Normal Topic RE: RE: (Short) Prologue to Time Sphere - bikerjob > Reply #5 - bikerjob > Reply #2
Started By Rob 		2 40
Rob has reposted a reply cut from an earlier thread of his, together with ...View
Latest poster: Athelstone 2 months ago
Normal Topic Prison visit - second edit
Started By Tenacityflux 		16 75
Thanks - I know there is still a lot of ends to tie up in th emiddle, but ...View
Latest poster: Tenacityflux 2 months ago
Normal Topic Does this fly? (only 800 words)
Started By Eli d’Elbée 		9 58
TF - Yes, writing a "case study" makes for a hellishly boring read. ...View
Latest poster: Eli d’Elbée 2 months ago