Just Starting out - Advice appreciated

Fri, Sep 15 2017 08:26pm IST 1
Groggy
Groggy
51 Posts
I'm guessing 'don't take this piss' should be 'the', rather than his boss being possessive.

Still loving this and would genuinely be interested in the whole thing. Dialogue is king, but L has made some excellent points.

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