| Tue, Jul 27 2010 07:49pm IST 1 |

EmmaD
1801 Posts
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At least, not the point when you're a reader.
And, dare I say it, why whether you liked a fellow
Word-Clouder's writing isn't the point either, if what you and they
want is to make it better (rather than offering fellowship and
support, which is a completely different reason for reading someone
else's work, when 'I liked this' may be a reasonable thing to
say)
The question you should be asking yourself, as a reader reading
anyone else's work, is does the writer succeed in what they're
trying to write? Do they deliver what they set out to
deliver?
http://blog.nathanbransford.com/2010/07/one-question-writers-should-never-ask.html?spref=tw
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| Tue, Jul 27 2010 08:45pm IST 2 |

Kiki
106 Posts
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This is a really good point. All too often I say I like something,
when should I really be saying this when offering advice / help /
honest critique.
Looking back over some of my Degree work recently I noticed that my
tutor's have also put "I liked this Kirie....blah blah blah......"
Should they say whether they like it or not?! I don't think so,
they should just mark the bloody assignment.
When your book has been published then "I like / I dislike" is more
relevant and important.
What a load of tripe I write when I am over tired, and have been
drinking a certain energy drink!
Ha. Sorry Emma, I thought this was a good discussion subject.
:)
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| Tue, Jul 27 2010 09:06pm IST 3 |

EmmaD
1801 Posts
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Frankly, I say to students that I liked it because it's part of the
teacherly praise sandwich: say something positive, say something
negative, say something positive. And there's always something to
like, so it doesn't do any harm, and means that their ears are open
(as they wouldn't be if I'd say, 'I hated this',) for the proper
constructive stuff I'm about to start in on...
I don't actually think there's anything wrong with saying that you
liked a piece you're critiquing, if you did. The point really is
that it's not much use - beyond ear-opening - so you need to move
on from that, to the meat of of 'what are they trying to do?' and
'to what extent have they achieved this?' and 'if not, why
not...'
Emma
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| Wed, Jul 28 2010 01:05am IST 4 |

Aonghus Fallon
571 Posts
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I think there's something at the start of 'critiques' about trying
to be positive, so maybe this is why people try do so . And a good
critique should stress what the author is doing right as well as
wrong, but - just as you say, Emma - it's also about assessing a
work in terms of what the writer was trying to achieve and whether
they succeeded or not.
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| Wed, Jul 28 2010 02:13am IST 5 |

Babblefish
846 Posts
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If you don't have any criticism whatsoever then why bother saying
anything?
If you don't have anything nice to say about it then why bother
reading the whole thing in the first place?
Okay, maybe that's a little too absolute, but still, it's what I
am for in commenting.
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| Wed, Jul 28 2010 06:54am IST 6 |

Jill
232 Posts
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I believe that there is a place for 'I like it' or 'I enjoyed it'
from a Cloud member, when they want to support a fellow, but do
not have time or energy to appraise fully and/or do not put up
their own work for critique?
At this stage of Cloud's development, I think most know that work
will be critiqued constructively by at least one person, who
wishes both to participate in this way and also to develop their
own work by honing their critiquing skills.
I also believe that all the exchanges on Cloud have been and will
continue to be of mutual benefit to members' writing skills. We
are not afraid of admitting mistakes or errors of judgement
either, which is excellent.
I am only trying to sum up here what has gone on in different
arenas over the past 18 months or so.
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| Mon, Aug 2 2010 10:33am IST 7 |

louise
72 Posts
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Some of critiquing is about judging reader engagement - did it grab
you, did you want to read on? That's very subjective, of course but
i think it's worth saying whether you enjoyed it or didn't because
the writer can then put this against other comments and decide
whether it simply wasn't to your taste or whether in fact every
reader is feeling uninterested. But I think you also then need to
say whether this is the kind of book you would choose to read even
before you knew it's quality. If for instance it isn't a genre you
enjoy, that's an important qualifier.
But yes, the techniques employed can be studied objectively
regardless of whether you personally like it, just as art is
appraised regardless of whether you would want it hanging in your
house.
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| Tue, Aug 3 2010 04:39am IST 8 |

stephenterry
1702 Posts
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I would say that I am one of the more critical posters. Not because
I want to destroy fragile egos, but to offer my viewpoint from a
reader's perspective - not from a writer's perspective.
I would hope that others would comment in the same way about my
indifferent extracts, that are aimed at the commercial
market.
A literary voice, I do not possess, nor will I ever be acclaimed
for my literary prowess. I can live with that. If people enjoy my
stories, that is enough satisfaction. If they do not, then I am
more than willing to make changes.
Every writer needs support. No man (or woman) is an island. If I
say I like something, it's because the story is good: full of
atmosphere, some tension and drama.
kind regards
Honest joe
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| Wed, Aug 4 2010 01:45pm IST 9 |

Caf
12 Posts
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As a fledgling, untrained writer, whether another author/reader
likes my writing is, at this stage, the only
point. It means I've achieved my goal, for now. I think
that is why Word Cloud is such a good Site, you can Blog, which
seems to be fairly casual, a good place to test the waters, and if
readers don't like your work, they can just stop reading. Or you
can post on that other really scarey place, where you are inviting
serious critiques, where an "I didn't like this because...." will
be followed by constructive criticism.
Really thought provoking topic Emma, sorry my comment is probably
inane, as usual.
Caf
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