| Sun, Aug 29 2010 07:54pm IST 1 |

Noel
122 Posts
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Endangered
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The boy stood in half-darkness, staring wide-eyed. His father lay
sprawled out, face twitching, throat wheezing and gurgling. The
tiger glared, stabbing them with fierce eyes. 'No sudden
movements,' the boy's mother had whispered.
The tiger growled. The ground beneath the boy shook. He could
smell the tiger's damp fur, feel its breath, hear its beating
heart.
Suddenly, screeching, loud and shrill. Then a violent judder; the
boy stumbled forward. Something grasped him...
The tiger lunged...
...scooped him up into warm arms.
...slammed into thick, metal bars.
'Not so close, Samuel.' His mother pulled him back from the
cage.
Sharp claws tore at the bars and wire mesh.
'Mike,' his mother's foot prodded the snoring figure. 'Mike, wake
up.'
'Wh...what?'
Muffled voices, metal creaking and clanking, then sunlight
flooding in -
'The train - we've stopped. The truck from game reserve will be
waiting.'
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| Mon, Aug 30 2010 01:09pm IST 2 |

JonB
62 Posts
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The Dinner
No-one said much during the main course. I knew before serving
the potatoes weren't ready and was disappointed to find the beef
tough. I saw Mum struggling to chew and then discretely take out
the meat out of her mouth and bury it under a cabbage leaf. Then
there was a clang as a potato skidded out from under Dad's knife.
He took the napkin from his lap and mopped the gravy from the
front of his shirt.
"That was lovely," said Mum when she had done, although she had
probably eaten only half her food. Dad agreed, still dabbing at
his shirt. I took the plates away and got the crumble out of the
oven, rhubarb bubbling nicely through the golden topping. I got
the custard hot and took the desserts through. The mood lifted
and soon both bowls were scraped clean. "Is there any more?" Mum
asked.
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| Tue, Aug 31 2010 03:41pm IST 3 |

Rebecca
268 Posts
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It was like the time we lost him on the beach, both thinking he
was safe with the other. Fluorescent lights leave no hiding
place. Crowds hide possible abductors; so small a child
disappears in an instant to be lost forever. Not to my child? All
murdered children belong to someone. Which way to look first when
every choice is wrong? Panic forces me through crowds, pushing
aside trolleys and peering between legs while John runs up the
escalator to look down from the mezzanine. He shakes his head,
his face bleached of colour.
"Customer Services" looms. Please God someone has found him and
handed him in like a lost purse. I arrive in time to hear a
small, familiar voice say, 'It's all right. Don't worry. Mummy
will come and find me.'
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| Thu, Sep 2 2010 10:25am IST 4 |

Seanín
13 Posts
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As the
child approached her first birthday, it had become clear that for
her, the usual milestones were nowhere in sight. They seemed
unreachable, lost in the mystery of her illness.
Her
second birthday came and went; still, she remained as she had
been the year before. No movement; no desire to try. And yet
there remained a little hope – a tiny spark of a prayer that
ticked quietly inside her mother’s chest, waiting to be ignited
into a full blown flame.
Time
doubled over on itself, and the child turned four. Her mother’s
silent will had evolved into a whisper, a gentle coaxing; the
child’s instincts began to take over, replacing fear with
curiosity.
The
child placed both hands on the floor, levered herself upwards,
and stood for the first time. She wobbled, unsure. Then, ever so
slowly, toes pointing the way, those tentative first steps were
taken. Finally.
(150 words)
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| Thu, Sep 2 2010 10:27am IST 5 |

Liss
384 Posts
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Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep
He's dead.
Oh no, wait.
He's alive!
;)
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| Sun, Sep 5 2010 12:59am IST 6 |

Nancy
36 Posts
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The Tour 
Cologne, with
cathedral; bathroom fitted more than
adequately.
St Moritz, attracts the dowdy rich;
bathroom classily upmarket.
Zermatt to climb the Matterhorn,
feet or funicular and cable car, and find a splendid bathroom;
spa bath missing, but Jacuzzis, pool, steam room, sauna, sun-beds
and fizz by the bottle ready to hand.
Dijon for mustard, snails... I
don't remember beyond the snails; they even invaded the bathroom,
which, other than them, was the best yet. Do they know the cost
of mosaic tiles and real granite? If they didn't they do
now.
Arrive home, tired, sticky,
grubby... and sink into a bath that does have jets, and is
surrounded by mosaic tiles, granite... and no snails. Good
holiday? Remembered to stock up on fizz? Yes, and yes, but best
of all, come home to a beautiful British bathroom. It was worth
every penny, our bathroom.
(Flowers
dead...)
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| Mon, Sep 6 2010 12:49pm IST 7 |

The WordCloud
205 Posts
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Okie-doke, nice comp. Well done all. Warm hearts aplenty and some
nice writing too. Hon Ments:
to Kim for her Oscar poem (#5)
to Vin - well, just for being Vin really (#3)
to Noel for being a soppy romantic (#24)
to Jill (#25) for being just as bad
... but the title is won by Rebecca's little story, just above, for
being small but perfectly formed. The setting is nicely brought to
life, obliquely rather than directly. The terrible possibility is
fully alive without being overdone. The ending is perfectly handled
too: touching not for the reunion, but for the child's faith in
that reunion. Good job!
Rebecca: it's flowers or fizz for you. If you can let us know which
you'd prefer and an address to send to, then we'll have our
vintners, florists, butlers, footmen, carriages etc spring into
action ...
Congrats all round.
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| Mon, Sep 6 2010 12:59pm IST 8 |

Kim
207 Posts
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Congratulations Rebecca! Worthy winner. Enjoy your fizz or flowers.
:-)
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| Mon, Sep 6 2010 10:16pm IST 9 |

Rebecca
268 Posts
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Wow! I don't believe this. Two comps running? Wow and more wow.
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| Tue, Sep 7 2010 08:39am IST 10 |

Jill
232 Posts
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Congratulations once more, Rebecca - really pleased for you.
Thank you Dear Word Cloud for the Hon Ments - I feel most honoured!
Yours truly, soppily and happily....
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