Clouders Competition April 2011

Sat, Apr 2 2011 03:33am IST 1
stephenterry
stephenterry
1882 Posts
Attributed to Hemingway is a short story: For sale, baby shoes, never worn.

This month, while we catch our breath it's flash fiction, a story (with a beginning, a middle and an end) from any genre; maximum 50 words.

The above is a sad piece, but please feel free to post upbeat sories as well - happy stories are welcome as well as sad ones. Let's get your creative juices running - best of luck peeps.
Sat, Apr 2 2011 12:41pm IST 2
Barb
Barb
312 Posts
It is one of the saddest pieces of flash. Off to have a think about this - I'll be back.
Sat, Apr 2 2011 03:06pm IST 3
Tenacityflux
Tenacityflux
1265 Posts
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Mum placed the advert in the paper as she always said she would when I won my Paralympics gold, it was our deal.

‘My God!’ She exclaimed when I opened the door to the buyer.

‘I knew you would do fine without me, just wanted to say congratulations.’ he smiled.

I have never done flash fiction before, and as this is such a sad title, I wanted to make something positive out of the title instead.

Sat, Apr 2 2011 03:07pm IST 4
Tenacityflux
Tenacityflux
1265 Posts
Sorry, it always posts that gibberish at the start, even if I delete it, and I can't seem to go back and edit it, if anyone else could that would be great!
Sun, Apr 3 2011 12:01am IST 5
Peter George
Peter George
76 Posts
Sorry, it always posts that gibberish at the start, even if I delete it, and I can't seem to go back and edit it, if anyone else could that would be great!

Tena, it's the formatting stuff that comes with your text when you key it into Word. If you copy your text and paste it into the body of a plain text email, it ditches all the rubbish, then you can copy back out and paste here in a more streamlined stylie.

I dump my text into Quark and it does the same job.

Apologies for littering the competition.

Peter

Sun, Apr 3 2011 04:47am IST 6
stephenterry
stephenterry
1882 Posts
Tena and Barb. Please feel free to post happy pieces as well - all are welcome...
Sun, Apr 3 2011 07:02am IST 7
Barb
Barb
312 Posts
I was saying Hemingway's was sad - not that they had to be for this contest. Sorry if that took anyone down the wrong path.
Sun, Apr 3 2011 07:11am IST 8
Barb
Barb
312 Posts

Jim sniffed. 'Smell the sweetness?'

'Yes, lovely,' Sam said, 'I like these ones that have just fallen.' He studied the plump morsel, the nectar inside straining against its skin. 'A true peach.'

Jim took a bite and licked his muzzle. 'Werewolf heaven, all these humans dying from sun stroke.'

Sun, Apr 3 2011 12:14pm IST 9
mike
mike
641 Posts

Tide flowed towards the beach where footprints led to the edge of the sea. Water sucked and gurgled around the footprints and then the tide ebbed away. Only sand remained.

Sun, Apr 3 2011 12:46pm IST 10
stephenterry
stephenterry
1882 Posts
Oh some lovely pieces. I am captivated by the talent here on WW. Keep them rolling in guys...
Sun, Apr 3 2011 08:36pm IST 11
Peter George
Peter George
76 Posts
Time to go.

The alarm wrenched me into consciousness.
Looking at the flashing digital display, I knew it was time for the next stage of my journey.
Rising, easier than expected, I permitted myself a backward glance.
I felt a pang of mischief as the crash team tried their damnedest to resuscitate me.
Sun, Apr 3 2011 09:44pm IST 12
Tenacityflux
Tenacityflux
1265 Posts
Tena and Barb. Please feel free to post happy pieces as well - all are welcome...

I thought mine was quite happy?

Sun, Apr 3 2011 11:56pm IST 13
Tony
Tony
2108 Posts
Sol 1 had sunk behind The Brekons thirty minutes ago and Sol 2 was already tingeing the low clouds with blue, against a perfect lemon sky. Bovus units grazing in old Thomas Jones' purple meadow cast lengthening shadows in the failing light. The aging pioneer sat on his stoop savouring an evening glass of what passed for whiskey on Sat 3. He was re-reading his naturalisation papers that had finally come through. Ten years. It was hard to believe. And now, here he was. For good. And he was thinking that fine malt wasn't the only thing he missed from the old days. The fiery liquid coursed through him as he fondly remembered the green, green grass of home.

Cool
Mon, Apr 4 2011 12:04am IST 14
Barb
Barb
312 Posts
There is a 50 word maximum to this challenge, Tony!
Mon, Apr 4 2011 12:25am IST 15
MarkR
MarkR
141 Posts

‘Time?’ asked the groom.

‘An hour late.’


Doors of a car slammed shut. Heads rose in enquiry.

The latch on the 18th century Oak door clanked with anxiety.


‘Err…Hello,’ the boy spoke into breathless silence. ‘T-t-telegram for a Mr Gold’

The groom marched the wrong way up the aisle, ‘Here!’

Mon, Apr 4 2011 12:46am IST 16
MarkR
MarkR
141 Posts

A Matter of Love and Death

I’ve escalated, dead.

Court is in session and the galleries sit in celestial and virtual clouds.

‘Who testifies for Love?’ the clerk enquires.

I stand. Proud.

‘I shall be calling Mr David Niven, Alfred Lord Tennyson and…’

I make them wait.

‘…Giacomo Puccini.’
Mon, Apr 4 2011 01:03am IST 17
MarkR
MarkR
141 Posts

‘Drink?’ the girl asked.

‘It’s kind, but no thank you.’

‘But I bought a leather jacket and everything.’

‘I’m a vampire Lucy, not from The Matrix.’

‘Alright, don’t bite my head off!’

‘And I first heard that one in seventeen-thirty.’

Lucy winked. ‘I do like the older man.’

Mon, Apr 4 2011 01:08pm IST 18
Noodledoodle
Noodledoodle
1179 Posts

The end of the Affair

The flicker of eyes from across the room; a blush and a polite smile. A flash of recognition; silent elation and a racing pulse. Anticipation; eyes connect. A mouthed ‘Hi’ cuts the tension; a cautious wave. A flash of gold; a wedding ring. My wedding ring. I drop my hand.

Mon, Apr 4 2011 03:42pm IST 19
stephenterry
stephenterry
1882 Posts
Oh some brilliant pieces. What stars we have here on WW. This is going to be so damn difficult to judge. Okay, I am a national Fuchsia and Pelargonium judge - honest - but you guys have raised the bar. Keep them rolling in...
Mon, Apr 4 2011 03:59pm IST 20
Danielle
Danielle
18 Posts

Thomas replaced the telephone. "That was...my ex-wife is dead."

"Oh."

"God. Oh, God."

"But, she was your ex, right? So it's not as bad as it might be. Right?"

Thomas studied his secretary. So young, unaccustomed to tact. "It's how she died."

"How?"

"Some kind of disease. An STD, apparently."

Mon, Apr 4 2011 05:06pm IST 21
Ancient Woodland
Ancient Woodland
53 Posts

Charles stared in awe as bits of flesh rained down around him, his metal detector lifeless at his side. Birds scattered in the wake of the explosion, webbed feet scuttling over the field, flippers straining for balance.

“You're a fucking genius!”

Garry laughed. “Yup. Penguins – God's minesweepers!”

Mon, Apr 4 2011 05:38pm IST 22
Slippers
Slippers
94 Posts
“Look at that!” Says Bandylegs
“I know. Children don’t believe anymore and now the grownups are melting us down and squeezing us into those!” Pinknose says pointing to the bottle.
“And look, they’ve even put our names in plain view!”

Next to the sink, is a bottle of Fairy Liquid.

Mon, Apr 4 2011 06:01pm IST 23
Rebecca
Rebecca
284 Posts

Evacuation of Auschitz, January 1945

A pall of frozen breath hung over the column; a human millipede with sixty-six thousand pairs of legs shuffled across white desolation in the bitter dawn. Ahead lay Wodzislaw Śląski, and the border, where we’d be loaded into open boxcars and taken away to hide the scale of the atrocity.

Mon, Apr 4 2011 06:31pm IST 24
Barb
Barb
312 Posts

“In closing, we must stop destroying our environment. Learn from the civilization before us who perished from their own greed.'

The president brought his flippers together in front of him and bowed his bottle nose. With a final glance at the assembled school, he swam into the depths.

Mon, Apr 4 2011 09:55pm IST 25
Tenacityflux
Tenacityflux
1265 Posts
I got the idea that one had to write a story with the Hemmingway quote as the title, however, as I have never written flash before, I actually found the self imposed restriction helpful; and now I have realized that it makes more sense of the other entries!

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