October Cloud Comp.....

Mon, Oct 31 2011 10:21pm GMT 1
Old Fat Prop
Old Fat Prop
205 Posts

I have enjoyed reading the entries and wish to thank all entries. Many dark and melancholy tales here and several people actually knew that BA31 is the regular service from Heathrow to Hong Kong but no matter.

This month's honours go to Jak for the reincarnation tale. Runner up is Noodles tale of J-lo, most amusing, ST in third with his oblivion. And special mention to Alan P's masterpiece of piss take.

Skylark. Great tale but sadly too long and thus unfair to the others if I allowed it. I would love to read the next 500 words........

Over to you Jak, Noodles, on stand by if Jak is unavailable.........

Cheers all once again and you lot have no idea how difficult it is to pick a winner of thsi comp with so many good entries.

Jak, its your shout.

Mon, Oct 31 2011 10:40pm GMT 2
Caducean Whisks
Caducean Whisks
1236 Posts
Many grats, Jak - a goodun. Knew you could do it.
Monsieur Prop, I must take issue over the early judgement; this comp closes at midnight on Monday, n'est pas? And it's only 10:30pm on Monday now (or was, when I opened this thread). Ah, perhaps you're not in England? Sorry. I'm too late. C'est la vie.
Still well done Jak - and Noodles and runners up.
Mon, Oct 31 2011 11:13pm GMT 3
Jak
Jak
623 Posts
Wow, what can I say?
Thank you....
And I hope everyone will enter Novembers contest
Tue, Nov 1 2011 06:18am GMT 4
stephenterry
stephenterry
1882 Posts
Well done Jak - great imagination.
Tue, Nov 1 2011 07:48am GMT 5
Noodledoodle
Noodledoodle
1180 Posts
Congrats Jak - well done :-)
Tue, Nov 1 2011 09:00am GMT 6
Veek
Veek
334 Posts
Great story, Jak. Well done!
Tue, Nov 1 2011 04:18pm GMT 7
Skylark
Skylark
433 Posts

Well done Jak - a great story Smile

And I thoroughly enjoyed Alan's take on it all too Laughing

OFP, thanks - I knew I'd disqualified myself as soon as I posted but I don't think I could have edited it any shorter anyway. Was great fun to write though - as for the next 500 words - use your imagination - it will probably do it more justice than anything I tried to write - hee hee.

Tue, Nov 1 2011 06:13pm GMT 8
Vanessa
Vanessa
403 Posts
Well done Jak...I guess the fact I went over the 200 mark was a big no no...oops...
Tue, Nov 1 2011 09:02pm GMT 9
Old Fat Prop
Old Fat Prop
205 Posts
Hi guys,

The limit was a killer I'm afraid. ( If you hadn't put the numbers down I wouldn't have counted).

In retrospect it was a mistake to impose such a tight limit.

The joy I had in winning the previous comp and setting up this one was hugely mitigated by having to pick just one "winner". That sucks as I am sure all of you will inevitably discover.
Thu, Nov 3 2011 10:56am GMT 10
Vanessa
Vanessa
403 Posts
I don't know if I have what it takes for such short stories...
Thu, Nov 3 2011 01:48pm GMT 11
MandC
MandC
9 Posts
Those were great, sorry i just missed out on entering!
Thu, Nov 3 2011 04:06pm GMT 12
Old Fat Prop
Old Fat Prop
205 Posts
I8,

Your story was hugely fun to read.

regardless of the word count, isn't that the whole idea here? to entertain and enjoy'...


Now go and win November.......
Mon, Nov 7 2011 10:48pm GMT 13
Vanessa
Vanessa
403 Posts
Thanks, for that...if I have time...:). By the way, did you get it? The longest journey in life is marriage...

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