My First Rejection

Tue, Nov 8 2011 11:25am GMT 1
martin1980
martin1980
5 Posts
Hi everyone,

I just joined this site yesterday and have been avidly reading some of the forum threads. It's comforting to know that others are going through similar processes and having to deal with similar frustrations and knock-backs. (Although I'd prefer for none of us to have to deal with knock-backs!)

Here's where I'm at: I've finished work on my first novel -- it's a modern fantasy story of around 88,000 words -- and have submitted it to several literary agents via email. I submitted to the first two agencies at the end of August and had heard nothing (until today), so I began planning the outline for my second novel while I waited.

Yesterday, however, I phoned the two agencies who hadn't replied to me just to check that they had received my emails. They were very nice and confirmed that the email had arrived and they would read it as soon as possible.

Just a few minutes ago my email program beeped and, after checking that specially-created email account every day for the past couple of months only to see the words 0 unread emails, imagine my shock to see a reply sitting there from one of the large, well-known agencies. Okay, it was a standardised, impersonal email response, but at least I can get on sending it out to some other places now, eh?

Well, I have a chapter to finish -- no point feeling sorry for myself. Onwards and upwards and other motion-related inspirational clichés aplenty!

Here's the rejection:

Thank you for your submission.

Unfortunately, we do not feel sufficiently committed to your material to offer representation. As you know, this is a highly competitive field, and an agent needs to be 100% behind a writer in order to represent them effectively. Unfortunately, we cannot give detailed feedback.

We are sorry not to have responded more positively, but do remember this is the reaction of just one agent, and you may well get a different response elsewhere. Thank you again for your submission, and best wishes for your every success.




Tue, Nov 8 2011 08:45pm GMT 2
Charlie
Charlie
135 Posts
Just keep writing your new novel and keep sending out the first. I'm sure the more experienced writers on here can be more specific; I think the usual advice is to persist till you have about 15 rejections or so. Doublecheck that the agents you submit to specialize in the kind of novel you've written, but you probably know that already. You could always ask for feedback on your synopsis or cover letter, just to make sure they get agents interested in your writing. All the best and good luck!
Wed, Nov 9 2011 05:13am GMT 3
martin1980
martin1980
5 Posts
Thanks, Charlie!
Wed, Nov 9 2011 08:11am GMT 4
stephenterry
stephenterry
1882 Posts
Agree with Charlie - send out more in batches, and keep writing.

Frustrating rejection - but it is standard. I have now come to the understanding that this type of response, i.e. 'not sufficiently committed to your material' means there is something 'not strong enough' with your writing in that it wouldn't attract a profitable readership. It could be the story, the characters, or even the content (e.g. bad-taste for this genre) - or a mixture of these. I'm ignoring grammar (because that can be rectified), to make a point.

The first rhetoric question an agent would ask, 'who's going to read this?' This is a hard lesson to learn when you feel like stretching the boundaries, because many mainstream agents/publishers won't take that risk.

This is only my opinion - others could and probably would differ.

You could post your first chapter on Critique forum and get WC feedback. Worth a try. Someone might be able to help you pin-point a weakness - providing you ask specifically for that...

kind regards
Wed, Nov 9 2011 04:26pm GMT 5
martin1980
martin1980
5 Posts
Hi stephenterry. Thanks for your reply. I have sent it out to a few other agents and will send to some more when I have time this weekend. I got my second rejection today actually.

I'm pretty sure that I'm going to leave the first novel as it is, unless someone offers to publish it and wants to make editorial changes. The reason for this is that it's the best I can do with that story. Meanwhile, I'm working on a sequel to the first story -- probably not a great idea in terms of trying to get published, but it's a story I need to get out of my head. Once that's done, I can focus on writing something entirely different and if it turned out that nobody wanted the first two they can be sold as e-books on Amazon.

So there. That's my plan. I'm lucky in that I was able to go part-time at work and still (just about) afford to live, which gives me the flexibility to play around with what I feel like writing and not purely with what I think will be a commercial hit.

My main goal is to keep writing and to keep getting better.
Thu, Nov 10 2011 02:57am GMT 6
stephenterry
stephenterry
1882 Posts
Good on you. Sounds like a plan. However, if you want to keep getting better (your words) how would you know unless you get independent feedback? Otherwise, it can be a lonely path Googling for guidance...

Just a suggestion, Martin - there are many people here who would be happy to help you get on the fast track...

take it or leave it -it's up to you.
kind regards - and let's hope the next batch hooks your agent.


Thu, Nov 10 2011 12:55pm GMT 7
martin1980
martin1980
5 Posts

I gave the novel to three 'beta readers' to read and got some very useful feedback that informed the 'final' draft. Now that I know about this forum, I have another option! Laughing

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