Latest publishing offer from an e-book publisher -

Mon, Dec 12 2011 11:51am GMT 1
stephenterry
stephenterry
1882 Posts
My 'way-out' cover letter...

Hello,

I am a British writer seeking professional representation/publication for my new (100k completed) police crime novel, featuring a female lead - and for my future works.

I write books I want to read – they are different from the current crop of police thrillers. My stories have a leisurely pace and focus on uncomfortable themes, showing the dark side of human nature, irreverent relationships, and obnoxious behaviour. My killers are evil, with no redeeming features and, apart from my MC, most characters are not upstanding members of the community.

My latest novel, Darkness, is set in a fictitious town near Bristol in 1986. The story follows DS Jackie Steel, a sassy, hard-nosed, idealist with a keen sense of natural justice – her kind.

Introduction

England, November 1986

Come into my parlour, said the spider to the fly – Mary Howitt (adaptation)

The UK Government led by Margaret Thatcher oversees a UK police force, some of which include police officers seeking financial reward through supporting illegal activities and engaging with major criminals. Bridleton Elite Crimes Squad (BECS) is one of those.

In the summer of 1986 a series of complaints directed at some Bridleton officers prompted an independent investigation. The ensuing report, which was never made public, criticised the squad's interviewing techniques, failure to properly use pocketbooks, and their cynical approach and lack of sympathy towards crime victims.

Up until December 1986 members of the 20-strong squad would write out false confessions and coerce the suspects to sign them. Officers were working "totally unrealistic" hours, abusing the overtime system, with some working 100 hours overtime a month, mostly for visits to licensed premises to "meet contacts".

The report made no mention of the "veiled threats" and other persecution techniques referred to by some victims of the squad. Nor did it highlight the repeated appearance in interview notes of key "confessional" phrases such as "That bastard's set me up" and "You're spot on".

By December 1986 there was also a shift in the government’s awareness of the threat of AIDS, a disease that has no cure. A few BECS officers took advantage of AIDS victims to pervert the course of justice and to further their careers, while nonchalantly hunting a murderer on their patch…

…A repugnant, immoral killer who would reap havoc across the region…

I have a fledgling web-site (stephenterry.weebly.com). Before I retired, I was employed as a Charity Auditor working in some forty countries over the last ten years writing reports to a professional standard. I have a sense of humour and I enjoy writing with a passion for the unusual.

I do hope you will consider representing me in publishing my novel.

Kind regards

Stephen Terry


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Good morning,
Thank you for your submission for publication to Andrews UK. My name's Matt and I'm the author liaison here at AUK.
I have attached our author guidelines and our generic contract to this email. Subject to your book passing our quality control and guideline recommendations we are more than happy to publish your work(s). The idea is fresh and interesting, and that's what we like here at AUK.
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Anyone here have dealings with AUK? I suspect that anyone submitting a reasonable 'grammatically correct' cover letter would receive a similar response - so I'm not sold. Website seems professional enough - who knows?

Any feedback welcomed.


Mon, Dec 12 2011 02:49pm GMT 2
Caducean Whisks
Caducean Whisks
1236 Posts
Hmm, sorry Stephen, but this sounds like a standard response to me. They make no specific reference to your work or give any clue that they've even read the extract you sent. Only question is, how much are they charging and do you want what they offer? They're clearly not an agent (so you could miss out the 'representation' bit).
I couldn't see them on Predators and Editors but AUK sounds like an abbreviation of something, and I suppose companies can change names all the time.

With regard to your covering letter, it's refreshingly different and the only thing that jumps out at me is the parenthetical (100k completed) bit. My feeling is that nothing should be in brackets unless it really is a side-issue and really can't go anywhere else.
Neither of these is the case in your example: the length and the completion status are very relevant to your proposition and so deserve equal status with the rest of it. Also, brackets make things lumpy to read.
What's wrong with, 'I am ... seeking representation for my new police crime novel of 100k words in total, which features ...'
Mon, Dec 12 2011 04:59pm GMT 3
Tony
Tony
2114 Posts
Yes, a good and wise response from Whisks there, Stephen. And Whisks, 'AUK sounds like an abbreviation of something' - Andrews UK, do you suppose?

Cool
Mon, Dec 12 2011 05:14pm GMT 4
Caducean Whisks
Caducean Whisks
1236 Posts
Duh, of course Tony. *blushes*
Tue, Dec 13 2011 02:57am GMT 5
stephenterry
stephenterry
1882 Posts
Yes, I agree it is a standard response, hence my query. Good point CW, and thanks for the feedback. Andrews UK it is.

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