| Thu, Dec 22 2011 09:09pm GMT 1 |

sevensins
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Evening all - I am almost done with my first novel. It is about a
young gay Muslim man who struggles with his identity. It contains
various sub plots involving seduction by an elder lady, break up
with a girlfriend he never wanted and love confession to another
man. Is it saleable, marketable, and would anyone be interested in
that sort of stuff? If so, what sort of literary agents should I be
approaching with my manuscript? Any response will be greatly
appreciated. Thank you
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| Thu, Dec 22 2011 10:41pm GMT 2 |

Barb
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It doesn't come down to what the book is about - it has more to do
with how well written it is. You can write about the history of
sawdust and it will sell if it's an amazing read. What sort of
feedback have you have? Who have you asked to read some for
you?
You'll get great help and input here, so it might be worth loading
some up for feedback.
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| Thu, Dec 22 2011 11:50pm GMT 3 |

sevensins
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Hi Barb
Thank you for your response. A friend has offered to read it once
it's complete so I'll do that and see what he thinks. I have been
told in the past that whatever is a good read will sell so I am
hoping, naturally, that it is. I've posted the opening of it here
around 18 months ago and some of the feedback I received was not
too bad - although that opening has now been substantially
revised and almost completely replaced. Thanks for encouraging me
to load up some of my work for feedback - I'm very conscious
about my work but I guess I'll never know unless I try.
I shall load the first chapter here and see what happens.
Thank you for your response and support.
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| Thu, Dec 22 2011 11:55pm GMT 4 |

Tony
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Good advice, there, from Barb. When it comes to deciding which
agents to approach you will need to research each of them in the
Writers' and Authors' Yearbook or on-line to see which is likely to
be interested in your subject matter.
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| Fri, Dec 23 2011 12:41am GMT 5 |

EmmaD
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There's some good advice here, from the Cloud's own parent, about
the whole business of agents:
http://www.writersworkshop.co.uk/agents-advice.html
On the whole though, apart from certain niches (crime, sf/f,
perhaps women's fiction) that some agents inhabit, it's very hard
to be definitive about which agents will like what - on the whole,
they're generalists, and whether a book floats their particular
boat or not is something that's hard to guess. So I'd always
suggest that you resign yourself to submitting quite widely, in
batches, and seeing what happens.
To narrow the field a bit you could think about authors you admire
who write the kind of book that would appeal to readers who would
also like your novel, and then trying to find out who those
authors' agent is. "name of author" +agent on google will often
turn it up, and many authors give their agent's name on their
website - and/or thank the agent in an acknowledgment. Similarly,
try browsing a library or big bookshop for books which are aimed at
the same market as yours.
Best of luck!
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| Fri, Dec 23 2011 09:47am GMT 6 |

sevensins
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Many thanks for the suggestions - googling a particular author +
agent sounds very helpful. I shall also upload some of my work here
and see where that goes. Submitting widely is most certainly on my
agenda - all sounds very daunting and nerve-wracking but here goes!
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| Fri, Dec 23 2011 01:12pm GMT 7 |

EmmaD
1997 Posts
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Paradoxically, I think submitting widely can really help with the
nerves - if anything can.
There is nothing as hideous as knowing that all your eggs
are in a single agent's basket (ask any author who has an agent
what it's like waiting to hear what they think of the WIP). Whereas
if you do it in batches of ten, say, by the time the last one comes
back you're well into the next novel/batch of
submissions/alternative career plan...
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| Fri, Dec 23 2011 01:23pm GMT 8 |

sevensins
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Alternative career plan is certainly springing to my mind more and
more often, even though i've only just started....fingers crossed.
Most agents seem to require a synopsis and first three chapters.
I've completed the first chapter and almost done with'tidying up'
the second and third - a week or two more and I think I shall be
sending off my first batch of submissions
thank you for your kind assistance so far
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| Fri, Dec 23 2011 04:28pm GMT 9 |

EmmaD
1997 Posts
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You're welcome! Mind you, none of us have career plans - there's no
such thing for a writer, not really. Just prayers that we'll sell
the next book, a day job, and a back-up plan for when we finally
have to acknowledge we can't make even part of a living this way.
Either that or a rich spouse/partner/parent...
You might find Harry Bingham's book The WAAYB Guide to Getting
Published useful. (Full disclosure: Harry owns Writers Workshop and
so the Word Cloud. And I'm quoted in the book).
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| Fri, Dec 23 2011 05:52pm GMT 10 |

sevensins
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thanks for recommending Bingham's book - i'll most certainly check
it out and hope it helps
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