Question on submitting MS.

Tue, Jan 3 2012 12:26pm GMT 1
sevensins
sevensins
23 Posts
I have almost completed my MS and have edited the first three chapters so they are ready for submission. Most agents I have researched seem to require the first three chapters or something similar - do I therefore start submitting what is complete (whilst working on the remainder of the MS) or should I complete my entire MS before submitting to agents.

Any help would be greatly appreciated.
Thank you.
Tue, Jan 3 2012 12:48pm GMT 2
BobAird
BobAird
92 Posts
Hi Sevenins,

Only submit what is asked for - nothing more, nothing less. I would also complete your entire MS before you submit your sample chapters because if the agent likes what he/she reads then you will get a phone call and they will be expecting the rest of the MS to be only the touch of a button away. If its not then I'll doubt they'll hang around to wait for it.

good luck

Bob
Tue, Jan 3 2012 01:00pm GMT 3
EmmaD
EmmaD
1997 Posts
Finish it first, for lots of reasons.

The main reason is that if you're to get anywhere, the chapters need to be as brilliant as it's humanly possible for you to make them. And you can't know that they are the best they can be, until you've finished the first draft, revised it totally, then edited it within an inch of its life, done any more revisions that the editing has revealed, knitted it all back up together, and polished the result. You can't do any of those later processes properly until you've got the whole novel written, and know what you're trying to do with it, what kind of beast it is, whether it's come in at the right sort of length etc. etc.

The subsidiary reasons include:

- if an agent loves the first three chapters she'll ask to see the rest. If you haven't written it then she's extremely unlikely to offer to represent you, because she's got no guarantee that the rest is as good as the beginning. At best, she'll tell you to get back to her when you've finished the whole thing, and maybe even give you a few tips for what they think may help. That's encouraging, but can also put huge pressure on you to finish it to her liking (which will be hard if you're just going on a few general comments), and quickly (even though in fact book-trade time is glacier time, and she won't turn a hair if it's a year or more before you send in the finished thing) . That isn't always good for your writing. All agents have stories of having seen terrific first chapters, only to find that when the balance comes in it tails off sadly, because the first three chapters were brilliantly polished, and the rest written in a horrible scramble. And there's nothing more heartbreaking than to have written - or re-written - a novel to suit something an agent's said they think you should do, only to have them rejected anyway, because actually it doesn't really work.

- if they reject the first three chapters, which is most likely because mostly they DO reject things, then if you want to send in the full MS in due course, even though you wouldn't say that they rejected it before, it's perfectly possible that they'll remember it. It'll then be starting off on the back foot as something they've already decided isn't good enough and saleable enough to take on - which is not a good start to their reading.

You could get hold of Harry Bingham's book the WAAYB Guide to Getting Published, which has lots of advice about approaching agents. (Full disclosure: Harry owns the Cloud and Writers' Workshop, and I'm occasionally employed by them)

Best of luck with it!
Tue, Jan 3 2012 01:28pm GMT 4
sevensins
sevensins
23 Posts
Thanks for such helpful advice. I guess I can put off researching agents and submitting for a while, and get cracking with chapter 4 and the remainder of my MS.

Many thanks.

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