Dialogue: quote marks within quote marks
| Mon, Jan 9 2012 09:19pm GMT 1 |

Captain Morgan
149 Posts
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Damn first-post formatting - please see below.
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| Mon, Jan 9 2012 09:22pm GMT 2 |

Captain Morgan
149 Posts
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Check the ends of
these sentences. Would you leave a space between the quote marks
(example 1) or not (example 2)? Editors appear to bicker over
this...
“He told me, ‘Don’t
bother with Absolute Write forums – stick to the Word Cloud.’
”
“He told me, ‘Don’t
bother with Absolute Write forums – stick to the Word
Cloud.’”
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| Mon, Jan 9 2012 09:28pm GMT 3 |

Skylark
433 Posts
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I'm not sure what the actual answer is about the spacing as I would
always rewrite to avoid the sort of quote you have above e.g. "He
told me not to bother with Absolute Write forums but to stick to
the Word Cloud." That way, there's no problem and it doesn't matter
if you don't know whether there is spacing or not
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| Mon, Jan 9 2012 09:34pm GMT 4 |

Captain Morgan
149 Posts
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Thanks for that
profoundly helpful answer!
Next!
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| Tue, Jan 10 2012 02:50am GMT 5 |

stephenterry
1882 Posts
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All the books I have read don't leave a space, but I like Skylark's
solution because triple speech marks look so untidy...
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| Tue, Jan 10 2012 07:41am GMT 6 |

EmmaD
1997 Posts
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No, don't leave a space - though I agree it looks a bit squished
up. It doesn't matter what manuscripts look like in that sense,
because they're not trying to look like a proper book (It's easy
for us to forget this, now that WP programs can do quite a good job
of looking like a book.) It's more important to be plain vanilla. A
typesetter would be rather un-thrilled with you if they to go fish
the space out between ' and '' each time. (Though not as
un-thrilled as if you'd done the paragraph indents with the space
bar. A lot of people still do.)
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| Tue, Jan 10 2012 08:53am GMT 7 |

Captain Morgan
149 Posts
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Agreed, ST – very untidy. But Skylark’s solution isn’t a solution
because unfortunately and unsurprisingly, the example sentence is
there for example purposes only and not snipped from a debut novel
titled WAR OF THE FORUMS…
And thanks, Emma – though I must admit I indent with the space
bar…Oh dear…
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