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Mon, Jan 30 2012 08:55pm GMT 1
Liss
Liss
13 Posts

I, my friends, am in a preverbial pickle.

Short version: I have had writer's block (severe, so severe that it has bled into and blocked my love of reading too!) For about five months now, perhaps more.

Before this horrid occurrence... occurred, I was happily bashing out random stories here and there, but there was one in particular that had been my baby from the beginning.

The problem is this: I have written and rewritten and re re re written this story so much, that the story is now rather vague and I feel I have lost my way.

I have walked away from it, I have tried writing exercises to re-associate myself with the characters, but I am still stuck. I now don't know what is good for me. Do I abandon it completely? Because something keeps making me come back to it and I still feel a flicker of the fiery burn that I used to feel, when I think about trying to rekindle it.

One of the issues is how much I have changed as a person. I am not the 17 year old I was when I first wrote it, but I love the characters. Another problem: Have I delved so deeply into their minds that I know them inside out but don't know how to portray them to other people?

Help!

Wed, Feb 1 2012 10:41pm GMT 2
John Taylor
John Taylor
916 Posts
Liss, I reached a very similar point in 2007. I had a series of 2 1/2 of a projected four novels written about a bunch of characters I knew and loved. All this had grown from one short story.
I still love those novels, although I know that I attempted far more than I was able to acheive. Quite simply, I was writing EVERYTHING and expecting a plot to hold it. That's what happens if, unlike you, you wait until you are 50 before you write a novel.
I then had to make a difficult decision. I knew that my writing skills were improving, and I knew that I wanted to go deeper into my characters, but the elaborate plot was getting in my way and my writing had stalled. But I couldn't quite let go. What I chose to do was simply write out what I wanted to write through two of my original cast: after all, I knew them very well.
Very quickly, a new novel appeared, quite unlike the original: more daring, more experimental, and the old fire came back - I began to write scenes I felt proud of. Shaping all that material into my present novel, I've talked about elsewhere, and it was a long process. But I would say that you CAN go with your gut feeling and keep a core of characters who keep talking to you, if you then let them take you in new directions.
Wed, Feb 1 2012 10:46pm GMT 3
Caducean Whisks
Caducean Whisks
1236 Posts
Wise words, our John. I'm listening too and shall ponder what you've said. I know you're right.
Sun, Feb 5 2012 07:02pm GMT 4
Liss
Liss
13 Posts
Thanks, John, I've actually revamped the story to where I feel I am now and think there may be a small flash of potential... :) x
Sat, Feb 11 2012 05:35pm GMT 5
John Costello
John Costello
62 Posts
Liss, Whenever I get a block, I go and do something else. I always find that if you love writing enough, your desire will return (absence makes the heart grow fonder...)
You should start another story and then, when the moment takes you, you can re-visit your 'baby'.

'John'

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