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Mozzie's Beta Barn

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I'm putting out a call for reading and feedback on the multi-part work of dystopian fiction I'm writing. The work is divided into novellas and I intend to post the first novella here, on a chapter-by-chapter basis. Any and all feedback, observations, critiques and hints will be gratefully received, as will effusive praise and biscuits.

The series plots the journey of Elenna Pointer who, as an innocent child, was purchased by the Final Justice Department and trained from the crib to be an Executioner. The first novella is her prologue, her experiences as a student killer. The rest of the series follows her through adulthood and charts the people she meets, the situations she encounters, and the unfolding conspiracy that surrounds her and draws her into the orbit of the most powerful people in the land. She may only be a gutter Executioner, but she has a secret so complete that not even she knows what it is. But others do, and they want it.

The series features themes of social class, family, the dynamic that exists between the blue-collar drudge and the white-collar master, and it unfolds across a terrible parallel London in a Britain that exists in total isolation, where the common people suffer under the rule of a hedonistic elite and where, in order to suppress the masses, commoners like Elenna are forced to serve the overlords. Elenna Pointer exists in a dark place, but even for her there is hope...

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  • OFP
    by OFP 4 days ago
    Just joined. Admire your previous stuff. This sounds heavy going and I will make quality time to read it.

  • Philippa
    by Philippa 8 days ago
    have had a peep and comment
  • Squidge
    by Squidge 8 days ago
    Can't guarantee to do huge amounts of reading at the mo, but I'll do my best.
  • Newbie
    by Newbie 8 days ago
    Hi, Mozzie, I remember Elenna Pointer and am so pleased I get to read more of her.