Don't read this poem.

Published by: Joey on 26th Feb 2010 | View all blogs by Joey
Don't read this poem
This poem tells you
The truth.

There is no scourge
As harsh as fact 
Uncouth.

You will lose love
Watch someone die
In pain.

The poor will stay
Out on the street
In rain.

You'll be alone
Sometime, with tears
And sighs.

Despite all hope
And joy, everyone
Dies.

You will be told
To hold your tongue
Be quiet.

You will be told
Your ways are wrong
By bigots.

But while it lasts
Don't waste your life
A crime.

Send good will out
Give those you love
Your time.

But don't read this poem 
This poem tells you 
The truth. 

Comments

7 Comments

  • Liss
    by Liss 1 year ago
    Cheery,
  • Liss
    by Liss 1 year ago
    Cheery,
  • Joey
    by Joey 1 year ago
    Lol weirdly I find this poem hopeful I'm not sure why....
  • ShaunBerge
    by ShaunBerge 1 year ago
    I really like this poem, I read it when you posted but forgot to comment. I have one major problem, and i'm unsure if it goes against the actual meaning of the poem.
    I don't like the first and last stanzas. I think it goes against the rest of it, the enlightening aspects of the poem. But I know that that's what they're meant to do, I just don't know if it truly fits...

    It's like saying,
    I wouldn't read this story, 'cause there's something to be learnt from it.

    This might just be me, though. I'd just change those two in some way....
  • Joey
    by Joey 1 year ago
    Ha, It was my attempt at being ironic I'm afraid but I'll take another look at it at some point I'm sure.
  • Alex
    by Alex 1 year ago
    I... in a way... think I love it! Don't ask me why I just think it holds much more in each line than one really reads and thats fascinating!
  • Tony
    by Tony 1 year ago
    Hi Joey. Can't comment on your poem - I didn't read it.
    (I did really; nice one.)
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