The Word Cloud

6 Comments

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  by maryluv 2 years ago

  Love it. Who hasn't worn their lover's clothes from time to time? I've gone to work wearing someone's aftershave, just so I can sniff my wrist and remember the previous night. One tiny thought. 'Aroma' doesn't quite work for me. I know there aren't many other options, but still...
  All in, though, I thoght this was super.
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  by Caducean Whisks 2 years ago

  Poignant.
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  by LittleS 2 years ago

  thanks guys. Aroma is one of my favourite words, just love the way it rolls round your mouth! Sorry you don't love it too Maryluv, but thank you so much for your feedback.
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  by Weens 2 years ago

  I'm not usually one for modern poetry, to tell you the truth, I don't understand most of it. However, yours is perfectly understandable, sweet, and as Whisks says, poignant.Despite it's brevity you make the point you are trying to make and I liked it.
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  by LittleS 2 years ago

  thanks!
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  by Simply-Kiwi 2 years ago

  lol, this is really cute!
  i like how you've written this!