Him (poem I wrote during my first year at uni)

Published by: palegirl on 26th Jan 2012 | View all blogs by palegirl
To see someone who stuns the eyes,
Is a rare experience indeed.
An instant addiction, like no other,
The desire to know them, a ferocious need.

Long, black hair, lavish and soft,
Ivory skin, as pale as bone.
Tall and lean but muscular and strong,
He radiates power though he’s brooding and alone.

Dark clothes, a long, black coat,
Strong male features, sadness in his face.
His brow is furrowed; he’s deep in thought,
His fingers twitch, he starts to pace.

Suddenly he turns, I catch his eye,
He touches his lip with his tongue.
With a smile full of promise, a tease’s expression,
The wind picks up and the man is gone.

Comments

7 Comments

  • Wrathnar the Unreasonable
    by Wrathnar the Unreasonable 3 months ago
    This reminds me of the vocalist dude from that goth band, the one who turned his toes up. It's very well-written, but I think I'm having a bit of a Dad reaction, oops.
  • Devlin Carnate
    by Devlin Carnate 3 months ago
    Poor old sod, I think he's embarrassed! Well, I like it, great poem.
  • palegirl
    by palegirl 3 months ago
    LOL

    Thank you very much ^_^
  • mike
    by mike 3 months ago
    Perhaps he was your tutor?
  • palegirl
    by palegirl 3 months ago
    No, the man is fictional, based on some famous men I quite like :)
  • MinxieAD
    by MinxieAD 3 months ago
    This is full of unspoken passion... More than a crush, but not quite love.

    I don't care who it's about, as long as I can meet him... hehe
  • palegirl
    by palegirl 3 months ago
    Tehe :D
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