Last Weekend's Realities

Published by: CyprusRachael on 1st Jun 2009 | View all blogs by CyprusRachael

On Friday night, Pete – fifty, unemployed, a heavy drinker – offed himself at home.

When he didn’t bring her lunch next day,

his deaf and bedridden mother pulled herself from her room

and found him lying in a crusty ocean of blood.  The flies had already been busy.

 

Two Sri Lankan girls came to scrub the terrazzo.  When they finished, they threw away their clothes.

 

On Saturday morning, Danny – thirteen, a schoolboy with an awesome smile – hit a steel crash barrier from the back of his best mate’s bike.

When his friend’s mother closed Danny’s eyes in hospital, just before his parents came, she said that there was not a mark on him. "Just like he was sleeping!"

 

On Sunday his classmates gathered at the harbour – crying, because he couldn’t anymore; laughing, because he never would again.

 

“I’ve actually done my homework this time!”  He had texted his English class seatmate

a hour before the last ride. But

“He’ll never turn it in now,” she said.

Comments

8 Comments

  • Caducean Whisks
    by Caducean Whisks 3 years ago
    Rachael, This is too awful - and the sparse writing tells far more than paragraphs of purple prose ever would: "they threw away their clothes" tells us all we need to know and more. A reality check, yes indeed.
  • Jacquie
    by Jacquie 3 years ago
    A chilling masterful piece.Rachael. I echo Whisks here - sparse yet as clear as a bell; a knock to the senses.
  • Kenty
    by Kenty 3 years ago
    'Great Rach' tell it how it is - this holds the secret of a thousand stories and poems - all of these things we will forget in a couple of days - but for others' there lives are not what they were last Friday - less than 72 hours ago - 'family' 'friends' doctors' the list go's on.
  • mike
    by mike 3 years ago
    And Cyrprus us such a beautiful placw
  • EzBloke
    by EzBloke 3 years ago
    This is deep and very... hurtful; it get's you right in the heart, let alone in the head.

    Ez
  • lizzie
    by lizzie 3 years ago
    This is so heart crushing Rachael. Very well written. Have you changed your user name?
  • JM
    by JM 3 years ago
    Simple, but effective.
  • Tony
    by Tony 3 years ago
    Poignant - and more so about the bedridden mother, the crying, laughing children and Danny's parents. Very well written CR.
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