Looking for the Whooosh!

Published by: Caducean Whisks on 14th Nov 2011 | View all blogs by Caducean Whisks
Hi all,
Perhaps you can help dig me out of no man's land? Appreciate it if you can.

I've been writing non-fiction for a while, and editing and twiddling and polishing and plotting for existing works - my own and others - and now I'd like to write a totally fresh project.

'How nice,' I hear you say. 'What is it?'

That's the prob. I haven't the faintest idea.

I fancy changing genres for the hell of it - perhaps something historical? Perhaps set far away? Perhaps even Sci-Fi?
I'm tempted to try a whodunit, or a wild caper. Something light and fun; something I've not done before.
I'd like to write 'Hitchhiker's Guide'. Oh, has it been done already?

I miss the whoosh of writing with abandon and would like to remind myself how that feels.
So particularly those who know how I write already (but others welcome), do you have any blinding suggestions for me? I don't mind doing a bit of research but don't want to get bogged down in it.

I've thought of using one of my older short stories as a template for a full-length novel (i.e. the synopsis already done?) and may do that.

Friends have urged me to write about my travels, or something set in Africa (since I lived there for a while), but that's essentially non-fiction again. ('I had a farm in Africa, below the Ngong hills' - oh, that's been done too?)

I want to find a new world and populate it with my imagination; to have the freedom to take the story any whacky way I please.

I've thought about adapting an ancient story to modern times - a Greek myth, or a Bible story, or a legend. Maybe. If I can think of a good one that hasn't been done.

In fact I have so many ideas but none of them with any legs; I'm tired of hopping along.
My pencils are nicely sharpened and I'm tapping my teeth. What's the next bit?
Any creative juices out there? Muchly appreciated if so.
Thanks.

Comments

46 Comments

  • Charlie
    by Charlie 6 months ago
    Mslexia have a short story competition on - 2200 words about what 2212 might be like. I doubt I'll make their deadline (28 Nov) but I find the subject very interesting. Have already discarded two ideas after hubby mentioned a few movies with my premise, but maybe you can find inspiration in that subject.
  • Aonghus Fallon
    by Aonghus Fallon 6 months ago
    I tend to laboriously plot out everything I write and will sometimes write the odd unpremeditated short story for a bit of r&r. The stories have a point (sort of) but they're largely anecdotal and the characters are very quickly sketched - they are clearly defined but I tend not to delve too deeply into what makes them tick unless I feel it helps move the story forward. Sometimes it can be a useful way of putting your current ms in perspective.

    Why not give yourself a week to write each story - then stick each one up here as a blog?
  • Spangles
    by Spangles 6 months ago
    I'm about to whiz off and get my hair cut so this must be short, unfortunately. (In common with my hair.) Will you be writing your new project with the intention of getting it published or will you be writing it purely for your own amusement/satisfaction? If it's the former, I believe it's essential to read several books that belong to the genre that you've chosen (so you know how it 'works'), and also for you to love that genre. It must excite and inspire you, otherwise whatever you write will ring hollow or you might simply lose interest in it, so perhaps you should read a few books from different genres to see if any of them pique your interest.

    Also, I'd say that almost everything has already been written. It's a question of *how* you write it that's important, bringing a fresh slant on something that's familiar. Think of all the romantic fiction and how it all deals with the same basic themes.

    Off to the snippers. Good luck!
  • Caducean Whisks
    by Caducean Whisks 6 months ago
    Mm, 200 years hence, Charlie? P'raps? It's tempting to go down the dystopian route but I don't want to depress myself even further. It would be a good twist for a utopian slant, if I can think of a credible one though. Thanks.
    Aonghus, I'm not keen on too much written down before I start - I tried that with my second tome - planned each chapter and so on - and in the end I was too bored to finish it, because I already knew what would happen. I think I *do* plot intently - but I let my subconscious work it out so that it can still surprise me. If I write the plot down, it dies on the page, becomes too limited, it's born too soon.
    Write yet more short stories? S'pose. Just bloody get on with it, Whisks. Er, please sir - write about *what*?
    Spangles, thanks - I do read quite widely already - my latest craze is for Shriver's marvellous 'Kevin' - which made me wonder about a thriller format, and her central questions about the nature of motherhood - what if your child turns out like that? Now she's gone and written it already. The only genre I actively avoid, is Horror - because there's enough horror in real life, without making it up; and I don't like being frightened.
  • CJ
    by CJ 6 months ago
    A couple of nights ago, I started to re-write 'The Tempest' in my head as a novel... maybe you could take on the Bard and give one of his tales a new twist? Or, heaven forfend, indulge in a little fan fiction? I find fan fiction a wonderfully naughty indulgence... rather like gorging on Maltesers in the bath, it's messy, all about you and no one needs to know. You don't have to think about coming up with new stuff because the bones are already laid out for you - you just pick something you like and put your own spin on it. It's terribly sordid, but oh so much fun!!
  • AlanP
    by AlanP 6 months ago
    If you want something completely off the wall then you need to just adopt a premis and stick with it. There are no completely new stories left as we all know. You could, for example try "Your MC is the most despicable person you can imagine and is told that he/she has a year to live. Of course the doctor hates him/her because he/she is despicable".

    Santa Claus is real.

    As Spangles says nothing should stand in the way of a good haircut - which I may use myself now I've arrived at it. I need 2,000 words by the end of the month. There's a premis in anything. My cat steals cheese, which makes her chunder (this is true btw). I have no idea where the addiction comes from.

    The trick is what you do next. But you know all this. Good luck.
  • Caducean Whisks
    by Caducean Whisks 6 months ago
    Ely, thanks. I don't know enough Bardic details, although her certainly was prolific. I also know nothing about fan fiction - probably because, er, I'm not a fan of anything (that I can think of - sorry!).
    But I take your point about removing the pressure on yourself by saying it's just for you. And this allies to Spangles's point which I neglected to answer - I always write just for myself and say that nobody need ever see it. Not sure I could write to order in the way of writing for the market - I once tried writing a M&B - and just couldn't do it. And even resented it as well.
  • SecretSpi
    by SecretSpi 6 months ago
    How strange - I had an idea for a completely new story on Friday - inspired by something I read in the paper. I think ideas come when you're not looking for them.

    What about the recent-ish past 80s or so for a setting. I loved your "Gold" story from the Inter-City challenge and books like "One Day" show that the 80s nostalgia is alive and kicking?
  • Caducean Whisks
    by Caducean Whisks 6 months ago
    Alan, I like 'Santa Claus is real' - will add that to the pot boiling in my brain, thanks.
    My cat likes lavender furniture polish. It doesn't make her chunder :)
  • Charlie
    by Charlie 6 months ago
    I used to rewrite my favourite story - The Little Mermaid as a kid, because it doesn't end at all well in the original and the Czech movie adaptation is so incredibly haunting I couldn't ever get it out of my head. Alas, it's been disneyfied already and the story is the poorer for it.

    However, what I'm suggesting is that you might want to look at some of the fairytales as they used to be, or some of Hauffs' more obscure ones and rewrite in the genre of your choice.

    I have one fairytale/fantasy brewing based on Plato's Symposium and a story cycle based on taking the same opening scene and then continuing the story in as many different genres as possible.
  • Charlie
    by Charlie 6 months ago
    Oh and "Loonies wanted" was an an article headline in my local paper a while ago. I thought a story based on an ad looking for crazies would be fun to explore.
  • Caducean Whisks
    by Caducean Whisks 6 months ago
    Spi, yes I used to keep a folder of quirky stories from the news, thinking that they might provide inspiration one day. My favourite was (still is) about a woman who's bra was tickling and when she went to the loo at work, discovered a baby bat in it - apparently the bra had been on the washing line overnight and she'd put it on that morning without noticing. As you do. But at the end of the day, it's only an anecdote, not a full-blown story.
    Thanks for your words about 'Gold'. I so enjoyed writing that - it's the kind of Whooosh! and Weee! that I'm missing atm.
    Thanks Charlie; I've had a go at a fairy story or two in the past and enjoyed myself (which is why I wouldn't mind doing another). All good brain food.
  • Caducean Whisks
    by Caducean Whisks 6 months ago
    Another good one, Charlie. It would indeed be fun to explore. Hm. :)
  • Gerilyn
    by Gerilyn 6 months ago
    What if there was another bird-flu pandemic that wiped out the entire human popluation and caused a strange mutation in chickens giving them a higher intelligence?

    This has nothing to do with your blog btw- I'm just thinking aloud.
  • Tony
    by Tony 6 months ago
    Variation on the theme of re-writing Shakespeare or one of the classics, or, indeed, any well-known work of fiction. Take one of the more interesting minor characters and write a story around them. Feste, a 'tragic clown' from Twelth Night; the Artful Dodger, from Oliver Twist - or Miss Moneypenny! What does she get up to when James is off galavanting around the world?
  • Caducean Whisks
    by Caducean Whisks 6 months ago
    Like that, Geri! Please carry on thinking out loud! It's added to my boiling pot.
    Yes Tony, I'm certainly drawn to a re-telling. I enjoyed Margaret Atwood's 'The Penelopiad' - written from the point of view of Penelope, Odysseus' wife who was left at home while he yomped across the seas - and what happened on the domestic front when he returned. (Trouble!)
    And isn't there a recent book about Mrs Noah?
    I'm liking all these suggestions. Knew I'd asked the right crowd.
  • Debi
    by Debi 6 months ago
    Do you know this competition? http://www.nycmidnight.com/ From what I can gather, they give you a genre and (I think) an article that has to appear and then you have a weekend (I think again!) to write a short story. Strikes me as a great way to stretch those writerly muscles. :-)
  • MinxieAD
    by MinxieAD 6 months ago
    Of course Santa is real!

    Debi's suggestion could be well worth a try, but if not, look for inspiration around you. Old buildings that may be haunted, graffiti on walls, characters on the street? You never know who you may be standing next to in a queue!

    There are a lot of untold stories. For example, a lady I’ve been interested in since finding out, (but I don’t think my writing would do her justice) is Eileen Mary Nearne. She had no family and kept herself to herself. Last September she passed away in her little flat and it was only realised then that she had been a WW2 spy working behind enemy lines, sending coded messages back to England. She never told her neighbours or anyone what she had gone through. Maybe true tales will inspire you?

    Hope you find 'it', but please don't stop posting your chicken stories!!!
  • Caducean Whisks
    by Caducean Whisks 6 months ago
    No, I didn't know about that story comp, Debs. Thank you - shall investigate post haste.
    Minxie, I remember you mentioning that when it happened and yes, it's bally interesting. As it happens, many of my short stories are 'whole lives with a secret' and it's something I'm drawn to. Not normal short story fodder, I concede.
    Thanks to everyone's suggestions, I've been brewing away in my head all afternoon.
    And no poppet, I won't stop my chicken stories - I hope that by doing something *else* I'll add energy to the remaining few I have to write - I've almost a book's worth (but am flagging at the last hurdle). Once they're boxed up and chirping away, the industry had better watch out - the clucks are comin' atcha!!!
  • Liss
    by Liss 6 months ago
    I get that desire for Whoosh completely. I tried to write a bit of a story in every genre, sufficed to say I now have 17 stories on the go. I need a PA! x
  • Tony
    by Tony 6 months ago
    How about a middle-aged writer who lives in a leafy suburb, rescues birds and talks to foxes, that sort of thing - you know the type - has a penchant for cupcakes. Well, she stumbles across a mystery - could be a burglary, could be murder, could be espoinage - you name it. Maybe she keeps chickens and they keep disappearing, one by one. A fugitive hiding in the woods? Or an ilegal immigrant? The tip of a human trafficing iceberg - the world is your lobster (as Arthur Daley used to say).
  • Caducean Whisks
    by Caducean Whisks 6 months ago
    Liss, perhaps you could offer yourself a job as a PA? I need one too, and if she's any good, perhaps she'd like a jobshare?
    And Tony, we'll let the 'middle-aged' pass for now (only for now, mind) and smile at your premise - but it's still too closely twined real life. I'm sick up and fed of having to weigh what I write about, against hurting the feelings of those I live near, or am related to, and so on. I want to carry on living where I am and carry on having the family that I have - but that's where my kind of non-fiction gets ticklish and to some extent, hamstrings me.
    I'm hunting for something I can write with joyful abandon without worrying about hurting feelings - which is why hist-fic appeals, or foreign-fic - although I still know people in foreign lands who may see themselves in what I may write - whether it's there or not.
    My pot is still bubbling, though. Thanks peeps for continued good suggestions - they're in the pot.
  • Noodledoodle
    by Noodledoodle 6 months ago
    I was toying with the idea of the boy who has a dream - not sure what, but something with real legs, like to circumnavigate the earth purely by sail. He has a penny, he buys a penny chew and swaps it with joe for an old coin he found in the garden. He cleans the old coin up and shows it to his next door neighbour who is an avid coin collector - the coin isn't overly rare but its worth a few quid. The old boy gives him a bike in exchange for the coin. The boy and his father work on the bike and sell it for fifty quid ... probably not the most original idea, but you could certainly have some fun with it as the years pass and the little pot of money grows. Not A whoooosh ... but your all the same if its any use!
  • Caducean Whisks
    by Caducean Whisks 6 months ago
    Thanks, Noodles, interesting. Yes, I remember similar stories in my 'Bunty' comic - quest-ish and exciting. Could be a good punt and compelling at every leg. Like Monica Dickens's 'Flowers in the Grass' which I read as a teenager (so about a hundred years ago, according to Tony!). Can't remember much, although the construct has stayed with me -something passed on from unrelated hand to hand. Or 'Accordian Crimes' by Annie Proulx - the story of an accordian passed from hand to hand. It's nice that you've added an ultimate wish - sailing round the world or something. It's like a fable, which I'm in the mood for.
  • Noodledoodle
    by Noodledoodle 6 months ago
    Another idea is one of sacrifice, seven sacrifices. That is, what it takes for forgiveness for the crime against / pain caused to another person - in this case seven or what ever number you wish.
    We all know that accidents just don't happen, they are a chain of sometimes related, sometimes unrelated events or a combination of the two. This chain of events could be tied loosely or directly to each sacrifce ... I never read Bunty, in fact I am a very poor reader so I may believe I have come up with something unique which has been covered one hundred times over!!! - ( I blush - shame on me!)
  • Caducean Whisks
    by Caducean Whisks 6 months ago
    No no Noodles - pleeeease don't think I was dissing it - there are only seven plots in the world, everyone knows that (er, can I list them? Noooo) - it's what you do with them that matters (it was even said that earlier).
    And don't worry again - Bunty comic covered all the main plots by the time I was ten. Whatever I write now, will only ever be a poor imitation; I know that.
    I like your idea of 'accidents don't just happen' - because they don't in general - they're the result of a chain of events. Could have gone either way at each junction. Yes.
  • Noodledoodle
    by Noodledoodle 6 months ago
    Thought never occurred to me cw, just bashing out ideas. I am a poor reader and I should be ashamed of myself! Fact! X
  • Tenacityflux
    by Tenacityflux 6 months ago
    Charlamain (s'cuse spelling) once asked his chief astronomer how high the sky was. The man was put into a room at the top of a high tower and spend a day making calculations, and then announced the high of the sky. Charlamain sent him away and then had the floor of the tower raised by one inch, and then asked him to come back and measure again. The man spent three days checking his measurements, and in the end came before the Emperor to admit that he didn't know why, but he now made the sky one inch closer and was sorry to have failed.
    Now, was the sky really one inch lower? No, the sky is not a roof and we know that...right? But what if instead of knowing that, we accept that the astronomer was right, not because he measured the sky but because his maths was so strong that when he made the measurements, the sky became like a roof above their heads. What if as each new mathematical or scientific theory is created, it is not that we discover the universe, but we create it, but because we don't know that's what we're doing, we can't use it. But what if one day, someone realized?

    No idea of that helps but hey, it amuses me!
  • Old Fat Prop
    by Old Fat Prop 6 months ago
    Something based on an aspect of your recent nonfiction exposure ?
    You already have most of the research and perhaps an interest.
    "teenage mutant ninja in-laws" is one of my projects.
  • mike
    by mike 6 months ago
    'I'm hunting for something I can write with joyful abandon without worrying about hurting feeling'.
    This is remarkably difficult to do. Have you considered attempting a traditional novel? Joanna Trollope does fine in the library.
  • Aonghus Fallon
    by Aonghus Fallon 6 months ago
    Mike's comment gave me a moment of introspection as it suddenly struck me that I write with joyful abandon ONLY when I'm showing a total disregard for other's feelings. Hmmm.....
  • Wrathnar the Unreasonable
    by Wrathnar the Unreasonable 6 months ago
    I find it easy to come up with scenarios (I have two lever-arch files bursting with scribbled down ideas) but I find that good character ideas are much harder to find.
    Mostly (but not always) it works like this for me: Take a scenario, drop in some characters and see what happens. If some sort of conflict arises, you've got a story (plot will then spontaneously occur).
    So, really, when looking for ideas, the best thing to concentrate on is characters.
  • Mcallan
    by Mcallan 6 months ago
    I'm with Wrathy...not literally...but in thought...sometimes...unless he's bangin' on about physics! Why not, if you want the gay abandon of writing freely, go for fantasy as you mentioned. Make up your own world where anything can be what it want's 'cos it's in your head. A journey is always good!
    Mac x
  • Caducean Whisks
    by Caducean Whisks 6 months ago
    Wow you lot! My brain's been buzzing all night, chewing up all these suggestions and burping in a most unlady-like fashion.
    Tfx - thanks, yes that amuses me too, the kind of bonkers thing that appeals.
    Prop, oddly, I'd not considered fiction based on my recent non-fiction! Geri suggested something chickenish at the top and maybe you're right, that's the answer? I do want to go somewhere I've never been before though - venture into unknown lands in a different time and place. Just for the crack of it. I like the sound of your project.
    Mike, yes, *isn't* it difficult to do! Whatever spews out the other end of this thought process may well be a traditional novel, but *about what?* Sorry to be pathetic.
    Aonghus - yes, indeedy! I can do it when it's clearly labelled 'fiction' and it's only ever a strand of someone's real life anyway, never the whole red book (and usually what I think about it, not the actual events).
    Wrath, isn't that odd, as I'm the other way around. Characters are easier for me than plots. Perhaps I should twist it all around then, and drop a character into a peculiar happenstance.
    Mac, the fantasy world is a zillionfold more random than real-life (obviously). I'm very open to quirking up real life, but stop short of little green men.
    Thanks you lovely lot.
  • John Taylor
    by John Taylor 6 months ago
    I too loved 'Gold'. Ecclesiastes said 'there's nothing new under the sun,' several thousand years ago, which either means, 'don't write anything, because it's been done,' or it means, 'you can write anything, because no one remembers it's been done.' I would take the latter course. And while I'm getting biblical, I once sketched out a fantasy that related the Tower of Babel story to the Interwebby-thing. You can have that idea for free, if you like. But because you write with immediacy and heart, Whisks, what I would really like from you is an intelligent romance with a lot of realism thrown in.
  • Caducean Whisks
    by Caducean Whisks 6 months ago
    Thanks John, it's rather nice to be taking orders. However, you want an *intelligent romance* from me with bloody realism? Goodness, I couldn't countenance such a thing. I've never written romance in my life. No sir, not me. Stuff and nonsense.
    Correction: I did recently write down a lucid dream I had which stayed with me. Difficult to say whether it was romance or lust; they're not always so easy to pick apart. Anyway, it involved someone I knew well but he's been dead 26 years. So much for that.
  • Caducean Whisks
    by Caducean Whisks 6 months ago
    Sorry John. I'm in a funny old mood tonight. Ignore me.
  • Gerilyn
    by Gerilyn 6 months ago
    "intelligent romance"? Now there's a contradiction.
  • John Taylor
    by John Taylor 6 months ago
    ...but a lovely contradiction, Geri. I love a bit of contradiction. And no, Whisks, I wouldn't dare ignore you – humour you, maybe...
  • Caducean Whisks
    by Caducean Whisks 6 months ago
    Yes, it's a very funny concept Geri, I agree (tee hee) - but I also know what you mean, John (as I'm sure Geri does).
    They say you should face your horrors, don't they?
    Actually you've both cheered me up a bit. Thanks. It's good to talk.
  • MarkR
    by MarkR 6 months ago
    Hi whisks.

    too late to be useful but what works for me is music. Listen to something that moves you in some way (gets you dancing, makesyou tearful, makes you smile, sounds right to your bones) and write the story that fits the music and your reaction to it.

    So far, of 7bn people on the planet this only works for me so there's room for more. good luck.
  • John Taylor
    by John Taylor 6 months ago
    ...and me, Mark. But one-at-a-time. I can't write and listen at the same time. Must be the old multi-tasking problem.
  • Caducean Whisks
    by Caducean Whisks 6 months ago
    Thanks Mark, music has been pivotal at times - but that's in *my* life; I find it difficult to transfer to an imagined character so it more-or-less becomes non-fiction again.
    Ditto John - one at a time is best for me too. And preferably music without words. Hadn't thought of that before, but it's true for me. How odd.
  • MarkR
    by MarkR 6 months ago
    Hi Whisks, Hi John,

    I agree with one at a time. I can only write whilst listening if I'm writing a story where the music is integral and I rarely consider having the music playing whilst reading, because it's two lots of input for the brain to process.

    I adore song lyrics that spark my imagination, but also love instrumentals (Sloe Gin John?). I've also tried songs in other languages because the sound of language is so evocative and it doesn't matter if I don't get the meaning of the words.
    French = Piaf. Italian = Paolo Conte. Arabic = Khaled. Turkish = Idzel. And I nearly forgot about opera, especially Puccini.

    Oh the possibilities are endless, if it works for you. I'm currently struggling with a story written around a Beatles track where the characters are in their 70s and he's Swedish. No connection to me or the track (A day in the life), it was a single line in the lyric that brought the plot to mind.

    Shut up Mark, you're boring people...
  • Caducean Whisks
    by Caducean Whisks 6 months ago
    Mark, no you're not! I suppose I might tend to *think* of music while I'm writing, instead of actually *listening*. I favour the intensely emotional pieces, like 'The Piano' or 'Jonathan Livingston Seagull' or 'Carmina Burana'. Just posted something very similar on Barry's blog. Dearie me, getting old.
  • MarkR
    by MarkR 6 months ago
    Whisks, no you're not ;-)

    For intensely emotional try: http://youtu.be/akbvhM4TpEI

    I like 2 of your 3 choices and am saying no more. Ever!
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