Pink frilly knickers

Published by: poppyseed on 26th May 2009 | View all blogs by poppyseed
I stood in wonder under a blossom filled tree.

The pinkness and softness of the petals reminded me of silk frilly knickers.

I smiled to myself, I used to wear them once.
 
Old now with grey thinning hair,  my knickers reach my knees.

I was beautiful once and men would knock on my door. Now only the gas man calls.

I am old but I still have thoughts, feelings and desires.

People forget this.

I am invisible.

Comments

4 Comments

  • EzBloke
    by EzBloke 3 years ago
    Awwwwwwww! Big hug!
    Very emotive Poppyseed. Very visual. *Very* sad.

    Ez
  • CyprusRachael
    by CyprusRachael 3 years ago
    Poignant.
    But so true. I'm 45 and was talking to a woman friend twenty years older the other day -- she said that when she was about fifty she felt that she wasn't beautiful any more: the heels went, the nice clothes went. She felt that she had moved from the realm of 'woman' to 'old woman' and that it was negative -- she became invisible as a person because she was no longer desirable.

    I'm sure that's not true for everyone, but she felt it very strongly.
  • JM
    by JM 3 years ago
    Simple, but poignant, evoking imagery.
  • poppyseed
    by poppyseed 3 years ago
    Thanks for the comments. I wrote this about my dear nanna, sadly long since dead. Still flutters in my heart though. As a teenager I would laugh at her baggy knickers.
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