The Publication Path

Published by: Rebecca Jane on 4th Jul 2010 | View all blogs by Rebecca Jane




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RIGGGGGHTY OH. I'm trekking down that path of finding an agent and getting published. Sounds really simple doesn't it?

Here's my plan. 1. Create a full blown, knock your socks off submission. 2. Send to agent 3. Sign to agent. 4. Write a bit more. 5. Find a publisher. 6. Get published...

So far we are on phase 1 / 2. It's been sent to a couple of agents, and the submission is there and waiting. Being the perfectionist I am I fear it's not good enough.

Just for kicks, I’ve decided to publish the Blurb to my first novel: Big Drama, Small Life... Jumping into that great fat ocean of 'CHICK LIT'...yeah well, chick lit is finding it's dark side... let's rock on...

Feel free to give constructive criticism... you may think of me as a brand new cutie little bunny rabbit, I’m damn well FRAGILE...lol, not quite, my skin is reasonably thick but please no one throw me to the lions!!!!!

 

Big Drama, Small Life - How one modern lady turns life upside down in order to start again.

We join Jessica, a 17 year old modern day lady on the start of her adult journey through life. A very personal and at times devastating path that Jessica weaves which will leave you reaching for the tissues. You’ll find yourself embroiled in her life as if it was your own, and when the rollercoaster spins out of control you’ll beg her to find the exit. Excitement and entertainment lie ahead, but be warned when she draws you into her deepest and darkest thoughts you’ll have no where to hide.

Embarking upon an affair with a married footballer was never part of her plan, and falling in love was not even on the scale. Marring a man ten years her senior, with mountains of baggage seemed like a good idea at the time. Professionally Jessica soars, making her first million at 21 and living the high life in the Lake District.

With her husband and his ex wife looming in the background, will she win the fight to claim what’s rightfully hers or will they take it all? Jessica’s life has gone too far out of control, and she only has herself to blame. It’s time to take her life, turn it upside down with one enormous force, totally destroy it and start all over again. It’s time to rip up the life map and create a new one!

Comments

5 Comments

  • Tony
    by Tony 1 year ago
    Hi Rebecca Jane, it sounds like you could have a humdinger of a story there. Jessica could be quite a character, although I didn't see quite enough in the 'blurb' to form an opinion of her. I think it works better when you move into the third person. Starting in the first person and then changing to second person - and then to third, is too much of a mixture. I'd stick third.

    The other thing, though, is this part of the submission? They will not normally ask for a blurb. They do want a synopsis, which, of course, is a much more detailed outline of the story from start to devastating, surprise finish that shows you have a progressing plot with conflict resolution, character development and so on.

    You like using metaphor, which is good. Just be careful not to get carried away. Roller-coaster (good), but 'spins out of control' (isn't that a roundabout?) and then 'find the exit' (em... hall of mirrors? maze?) Full marks for seeing the opportunity to use metaphor, but just just make sure you think it through thoroughly.

    If you'd like some pointers, you'l find some very helpful threads on here on submissions; synopses, in particular. Your obvious enthusiasm will stand you in good stead as you work on getting it the best it can be. Write on, Rebecca.
  • raven_guest
    by raven_guest 1 year ago
    My only comment would be is it chick lit or YA? Or both as the character is 17, does it begin there or does the book follow her at 21 and work backwards? I think it's a very now idea as the whole world is WAG crazy, definately current. Good luck. I was also in the belief that writing the book would be the hard work lol. Have you tried posting the first chapter in the critique section? It couldn't hurt to get some feedback as the agent will be reading that section.
  • mike
    by mike 1 year ago
    The high life in the Lake Diitrict? Mind you, i have never been there - the cost of single room supplements! You must be right. It is good to emphasize making a million at 21.
    Marrying someone with mountains of baggage? Good luck!
  • Rebecca Jane
    by Rebecca Jane 1 year ago
    cheers raven, it's certainly chick lit - the journey starts at 17 and progresses to 25. I do see the issue tho! Think i'll give the critique section a whirl.

    Tony - fair play about the 3rd person, considering few agencies want real character descriptions need to work on bringing her into the blub. Which is recommended however few specifically ask for it. Carloe Blake seems quite big on them, well that's the opinion formed from swallowing 'from pitch to publication'!.
    Your correct are on metaphor situation, it's one of them where I run with it and don't really think about it later! - proof reader required HAHA!

    Mike - i'm always right!

    :-D
  • Slippers
    by Slippers 1 year ago
    Hi Rebecca Jane, if you writing Chick-Lit stories check out this site http://www.chicklitshorties.com/ where they're asking for short stories. The first closing date has gone (July 1st) but they do rolling submissions. I have sent them a story which they liked the idea of, but I've not heard anything back.

    Good luck with your book.
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