Tritina: Bear Hunt
A tritina written for my online writing course. We were
given three words that we had to use at the end of the lines
(light, glass, and bear), and then in a different order for
each verse. And it finishes with one sentence with
all the end-words in. Darn fiddley to do!
Bear Hunt
Through the lamp’s flickering light
a form gathers within the glass
and slowly reveals a bear
Then hunters follow the bear,
the figures shimmering in the light
and bring to life the Roman cup of glass
Small bubbles haunt the blue glass
and in the their forest the bear
jumps and growls within lamp light
And so the light sparkles on the glass cup and also seems to hunt the bear


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(I tried one on your 'Week Three - Online Writing Course blog)
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