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It started with a kiss and then I saw the fangs.
When an unholy alliance between two monsters is about to be formed something is bound to go wrong. But then again marriage never goes smoothly.

“You’ve read Twilight. Now read its comedy cousin” Matt Robertson

I just felt like writing a supernatural comedy. So yeah!
My idea is to basically take Twilight, rip it apart, take one or two pieces and stick them together with plenty of my own to create a supernatural comedy.

Any idea/help/constructive criticism welcome.

And yes I know it may breach some copy-right barriers but I never said I was gunna publish the story :P 

I was writing yesterday and then it struck me to just start again like I hadn't done anything beyond the prologue--I spent three days writing one fucking prologue and it turned out nicely....but it didn't feel right once I got into the first chapter and felt "This isn't going to work" the moment I thought that my mind instantly threw me a different idea of how I could go on with it....and it works because I know how it could go along with themes of isolation and stuff along those lines.

Same idea, new character and story.....no longer Snow Stalkers and now just "The Snow Stalker".

I'm on the fifth rewrite of this werewolf stuff and I'm pretty pleased that this might be part of the final three (The last two will involve punctuation and then a brief rewrite for any comments made for people who I will share it out with)
I'm enjoying this writing process I have going on, get it down, add onto it and whatever.....relaxing in my own mind to bring a world together.
My belief is when you write embue characters with essense of your own soul, give them that part of you that you think works for each character......the little small parts of your own mind ripped up to be shared out.....but where am I going with post? I don't know for today after starting a rewrite to remove so many "I's" from the text and change whole chunks to make a better all emcompassing story.

Got up today at about 5 in the morning, just felt like it, but then got back into bed after barely a few minutes to think of writing.......I'm finally writing now, so everything is good.

Written, posted and here's the link: http://www.thewordcloud.org/forum/topic/934

Enjoy

So I got this idea for a different kind of "Werewolf" tale (I want people to realise I will use the term "Werewolf" as to make to easier to explain on my end.
basic idea came from looking over different books with werewolves that were ether complete animals or controllable, with what I'm writing is someone who has complete control over herself, but lacks the control of when she could change into a mixture of human and wolf. I'm wondering if people would ever consider reading something like it, where the main character grows to hate herself and then when she lets her self restraint go for one split second, leads to her nearly killing someone in a brutal beating.
The question is simply. Would you ever want to read it, If I finish it?

To anyone interested? I'm willing to give out a sample of the first chapter.