Greyowl59

Greyowl59

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  • Are you a ...?
    Writer published in mags, etc
    What genre do you primarily write in?
    Thriller
    If you write in more than one area, what is your next most favoured genre?
    Theatre
    Are your reading habits ...?
    Omnivorous
    What are your working habits when you write?
    Procastinatory
    Are you the edit-every-sentence-ten-times type, or do you prefer to let rip?
    Prefer to let rip and edit afterwards
    Your worst habit?
    Shooting my mouth off
    Your opinion on the books industry?
    It is a tough game, but everyone does their best
    Where do you write?
    Various locations
    What else do you want Word Clouders to know? eg: do you have 9 cats / like paragliding / eat nothing but tinned fish / work in the bath / live in Kettering?
    Various

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  • Wrathnar the Unreasonable
    by Wrathnar the Unreasonable 3 years ago
    Could have sworn I sent you a friend request - oversight on my part. I'll send one now.
  • Wrathnar the Unreasonable
    by Wrathnar the Unreasonable 3 years ago
    I'm desperately in need of help with a scene which is holding up my editing of the Moonbeast Bayou novel. Since you give such excellent, detailed criticism, I'm hoping your input could help me with this. I've got 3 days off which I can devote to editing, but I'm kinda stuck. It's the scene introducing Ariadne and Jock, which I've posted as ' another extract from Moonbeast bayou'. No comments yet! What I'm worried about is character engagement, and my handling of dialogue. Any comments highly valued!
  • Wrathnar the Unreasonable
    by Wrathnar the Unreasonable 3 years ago
    Thanks very much for your helpful feedback, to which i have replied - hopefully, without getting defensive! I've posted a thing on fantasy/SF group: "Does the fantasy genre fail to bring out the best in writers?" I would very much value your opinion. I intend to get around to reading some of your stuff. I've been reading Eshka and Elysia, hope my comments aren't entirely misconceived.
  • Mook
    by Mook 3 years ago
    Did you receive the PDF email?
  • Mook
    by Mook 3 years ago
    Could email the script in PDF if you would like. Just message an email address.
  • Has'san
    by Has'san 3 years ago
    Hello Greyowl,
    how are you?
    I am sorry that i saw your comments under my story today, and i really liked the suggestions. I read the second chapter once again myself, and yes there were so many overwriting. I told my cousin to type it for me thus... My question is do i really need action in the first two chapters, i don't understand why. Would you please let me know.
    Has'san
  • Sohini
    by Sohini 3 years ago
    Oh! Hope you have a good time!
  • Sohini
    by Sohini 3 years ago
    Hi owl, good to see you online. How are you?
  • Has'san
    by Has'san 3 years ago
    Thanks for the comment, it was really very useful. I will try to bring about the necessary suggestions you recommended. Thanks again.