Are you a ...?Writer published in mags, etcWhat genre do you primarily write in?ThrillerIf you write in more than one area, what is your next most favoured genre?TheatreAre your reading habits ...?OmnivorousWhat are your working habits when you write?ProcastinatoryAre you the edit-every-sentence-ten-times type, or do you prefer to let rip?Prefer to let rip and edit afterwardsYour worst habit?Shooting my mouth offYour opinion on the books industry?It is a tough game, but everyone does their bestWhere do you write?Various locationsWhat else do you want Word Clouders to know? eg: do you have 9 cats / like paragliding / eat nothing but tinned fish / work in the bath / live in Kettering?Various
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Could have sworn I sent you a friend request - oversight on my part. I'll send one now.
I'm desperately in need of help with a scene which is holding up my editing of the Moonbeast Bayou novel. Since you give such excellent, detailed criticism, I'm hoping your input could help me with this. I've got 3 days off which I can devote to editing, but I'm kinda stuck. It's the scene introducing Ariadne and Jock, which I've posted as ' another extract from Moonbeast bayou'. No comments yet! What I'm worried about is character engagement, and my handling of dialogue. Any comments highly valued!
Thanks very much for your helpful feedback, to which i have replied - hopefully, without getting defensive! I've posted a thing on fantasy/SF group: "Does the fantasy genre fail to bring out the best in writers?" I would very much value your opinion. I intend to get around to reading some of your stuff. I've been reading Eshka and Elysia, hope my comments aren't entirely misconceived.
by Mook 3 years agoDid you receive the PDF email?
by Mook 3 years agoCould email the script in PDF if you would like. Just message an email address.
by Has'san 3 years agoHello Greyowl,
how are you?
I am sorry that i saw your comments under my story today, and i really liked the suggestions. I read the second chapter once again myself, and yes there were so many overwriting. I told my cousin to type it for me thus... My question is do i really need action in the first two chapters, i don't understand why. Would you please let me know.
by Sohini 3 years agoOh! Hope you have a good time!
by Sohini 3 years agoHi owl, good to see you online. How are you?
by Has'san 3 years agoThanks for the comment, it was really very useful. I will try to bring about the necessary suggestions you recommended. Thanks again.