snippet 2 of my comedy 3 routes 1 road

Published by: callusdad27 on 14th Jan 2010 | View all blogs by callusdad27
Ok just to let people know that the first snippet i did was not actually a bingo comedy but that is where she works and was just one scene. here is a nother snippet. Anita is a very religious women but has a heart of gold. julie ...well im not to sure on her yet but working on it. anyway see for ya self

SCENE 3

Anita is sat at home and the phone rings

Anita: Hello?

( excited) Hellooo Julie. How are things?

Julie: Well I’m ringing to tell you that church is still on for Sunday.

Anita: OH that’s good.

Julie: Yeah but the vicar’s tag is still on his leg.

Anita: I don’t know Julie. What’s the world coming to?

I mean, we all know that the vicar loved his dog

Julie: Yeah I know.

Anita: I mean, are we sure that the dog didn’t throw himself on the vicar?

Julie: what dog was it?

Anita: I think it was a Doberman.

Julie: well that says it all doesn’t it

Anita: Right well shall we still bring the birthday cake for him?

Julie: Well we can but are you sure we should take it?

(Anita lifts the box and looks at the cake inside)

Anita: yeahhh it will be fine.

Comments

1 Comment

  • Tony
    by Tony 2 years ago
    Callus, I commented on the 'bingo' script, but my comment seems to have disappeared. I'm not sure why you're posting these particular clips. Nothing of any interest happens in them and they don't contain any funny lines. We don't really get to know anything about the characters either. Have you no snippets that might better represent the work as a whole and show the comedy. They could be slightly longer, if you like, but I did like the fact that you have posted short clips. (Some people put up very long pieces that I'm afraid I just haven't the time to read through and comment intelligibly upon.)
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