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  • Jill
    by Jill 5 months ago
    Cloud says it is your birthday ~ hope you have a wonderful day. :)
  • Squidge
    by Squidge 1 year ago
    Definitely not making a hash of anything -you're producing lots of good stuff...We all have those times when it seems nothing's going right with the writing. It WILL pass. Keep your chin up. :)
  • Jill
    by Jill 1 year ago
    PHEW! Joined new group, as invited. Thanks for enquiring. Making revisions to some more poetry at mo., so may put one up on group wall ~ OR thinking about a short story possibility. Not so sure about that, however. Good luck! Jx:)
  • Squidge
    by Squidge 1 year ago
    Quick question...re the 'role reversal' comp...would mistaken identity count?! Some discussion with Mr. Squidge...niot sure whether to submit anyway and risk being disqualified for not covering the right topic (she says, tongue-in-cheek!)
  • zoolane
    by zoolane 1 year ago
    I have have reply to questions and thank you for take time to readed it all.
  • zoolane
    by zoolane 1 year ago
    I made mistaken with chapter 4 it was actual a mixed 4/5. I have correct in and should make sent sense about new husband and mother.
  • zoolane
    by zoolane 1 year ago
    Also I shall addressed the points you made tomorrow sometime.
  • zoolane
    by zoolane 1 year ago
    I wrote the story age ago, this is first attempt at longish for me anyway story. I am have writer block so I though instead sit fiddle with my fingers. I chose to get feedback on here from different readers/writers which I hope will help me to make better and learn.
  • zoolane
    by zoolane 1 year ago
    I have finish William Faulkner 'The Sound and The Fury' strange end but it sort fit the story. The began with Benji and obvious to point it end with him. I think I will have go that next book. 'ABSALOM'.
  • zoolane
    by zoolane 1 year ago
    Thank you for your feedback, join my group and I hope answer your question