Ele
37 years old
Female
Location
Bath
United Kingdom
Current Status
Six inches deep in brick dust... HELP!Information
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Are you a ...?Unpublished writer (so far)What genre do you primarily write in?Experimental fictionAre your reading habits ...?OmnivorousWho is your favourite author(s)?Edith Wharton / Somerset MaughamAnd your all time favourite books? (You can change these at any time, by the way ...)Remains of the dayWhat are your working habits when you write?Perfectly balancedAre you the edit-every-sentence-ten-times type, or do you prefer to let rip?Prefer to let rip and edit afterwardsYour ultimate writing ambition?To have my stories published and have people like them!Your worst habit?Obsessive... and it's always my fault... and I ought to try harder...Your opinion on the books industry?Too much celebrity and hype, but good books still get throughWhere do you write?In my atticWhat else do you want Word Clouders to know? eg: do you have 9 cats / like paragliding / eat nothing but tinned fish / work in the bath / live in Kettering?I also paint - www.elenash.com have three quickly growing children and am a qualified primary school teacher (though I don't teach unless it's voluntary)
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19/03/2012 12:00AM3Attendees
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"Ele" commented on Lou's Blog "How I got... Part 5".Oh Lou, sounds amazing! Out of interest, are you able to let it go? Do you still wake in the night thinking 'maybe it would be better if I changed...' I know with a painting that once I've sold it (and only then) that it must be finished! Also, ...
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"Ele" commented on CJ's Blog "Another one hits the back of the net!".SQUEEEEEEAAAAAL!!!!!!
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"Ele" commented on CJ's Blog "Enough to make you want to weep".The analogies are true - in art as well. Sometimes it's snobbery but often bad art / music / script / acting is just a culmination of where the right connections can get you. I've decided to hunker down and write / paint what I really want to. If ...
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"Bren" commented on Ele's Blog "The Fall".Lee this is a beautiful poem. Dramatic and full of emotion. It made me cry. I had guessed your daughter was older. When children go to sec school they draw away but only because they are certain in your presence. However they push and pull needing ...
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"Hil" commented on Ele's Blog "The Fall".Ele, I'm sure there are and always will be times when your no-longer-little girl wants to be your girl. Yes, the relationship needs to grow and develop, and in a way there is loss, which you express so beautifully, but there are also gains. I have ...
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"Ele" commented on Ele's Blog "The Fall".Oh, Jill, I can imagine, with knowledge, each passing stage is even more poignant. I feel that even now. My youngest still holds my hand to school and every time he does I wonder if it will be the last time. Awful to live backwards, if you get ...
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"Ele" commented on Ele's Blog "The Fall".You are proof it can be the same for dad's, bazbaron! My husband doesn't seem to over-think / over-feel the way I do but at least one of us holds onto some perspective. I realise in a way, Mike had got the poem - not death but most definitely ...
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"bazbaron" commented on Ele's Blog "The Fall".Ele, that is a lovely poem perhaps you should Pigeon Hole it here: http://writing-community.writersworkshop.co.uk/magazine/read/poem-pigeon_6592.html I have four children Ele, I don't suppose blokes are supposed to have the feeling of loss. But I ...
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"Ele" commented on Ele's Blog "The Fall".Not angry at all, Minxie! Wise. I said I wasn't a poet, Mike!! I was trying to describe the unknown 'outside world'. When little, you (as a parent) have control of how far your children venture and you're always close then suddenly they're not ...
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About
Having had scenes revolving around my head for about a year, I decided enough was enough and I should try and write them down. Somehow, from somewhere, I found I couldn't stop writing and before long I had a story, part autobiography, part fiction.
Over this past year, I've tried and tried to turn that story into my first novel, bordering on madness several times, at other times euphoric, believing I'd 'got it'. But I never quite have. That's when I joined the Cloud.
After some excellent advice, I set aside what was becoming tortuous and began instead to write other things. Noticing the competitions on the 'upcoming events' on here, I submitted a short story to the Mslexia comp and then a piece of flash fiction and a short story to the Bridport Prize.
My writing still requires a fair degree of polishing, but I have at least found some way of writing out what I cannot paint.
Over this past year, I've tried and tried to turn that story into my first novel, bordering on madness several times, at other times euphoric, believing I'd 'got it'. But I never quite have. That's when I joined the Cloud.
After some excellent advice, I set aside what was becoming tortuous and began instead to write other things. Noticing the competitions on the 'upcoming events' on here, I submitted a short story to the Mslexia comp and then a piece of flash fiction and a short story to the Bridport Prize.
My writing still requires a fair degree of polishing, but I have at least found some way of writing out what I cannot paint.
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17th March 2013
The Fall
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1st February 2013
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18th September 2012
Errr... Do you think this critique of a 3000 word story was worth £35?
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5th August 2012
Tindal Street Press Masterclass
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11th May 2012
Critique of a Short Story
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by Jen 3 months agoIt really is a year. I feel a bit annoyed with myself that in that year I've achived so little. So it's no for you this time around too? maybe next year hey?
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by Jen 3 months agoEnd of March sometime - I'm not doing it but got sent this newletter email thing, which of course reminded me that it was that time of year again. Dust huh?! sounds bad and hard work but I'm still sure it will be worth it. When do you think it will be done??
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by Ele 3 months agoAw thanks Jen! No idea about Mslexia. All the dust from the house is settled in my brain like mizzle. When is the deadline?
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by Jen 3 months agoEle! I've missed you - glad you are back on the cloud! So the cottage work is going well. It will be worth it. Sorry about your computor. Turns out January was not a good month for weather or technology! my naughty laptop is still in the village shop - this is a desktop we have dug out the garage. It is barely functioning and everything takes an age but at least I'm able to get the internet so that's something! So I'm just going to come out and ask - msylexia - yay or nay for this year?
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by Jen 7 months agoEle - how are you? ok, so the big news is my love affair with the short story is well and truely over - and not even a place on a long list to show for it!! I'm going to try to put in 30 pages of a novel (yet to be written, you know I love the power of an approching deadline!) for the Lucy Cavendish prize instead... and then I'll be well on my way to have something to go to the FOW with next year - no way am I missing out again! hope the writing is going well for you :) x
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by Debi 8 months agoHi Ele - this is the link to the service from Writers' Workshop - who run the Cloud. http://www.writersworkshop.co.uk/writing-feedback.html Yes, I do freelance editing for them and have done for about 7 years so it goes without saying that I think they're fab. It IS a lot of money - and there are other consultancies though the charges don't vary by much. (It takes several days to read an MS and write a report - then there are the conversations afterwards ...) WW also offer a quick feedback service on an extract. Details at the critiques tab at the top of the screen. Or you might consider a course, which would cost less but would hopefully give you the tools to see your own writing with a fresh eye and know how to improve it. Check the courses tab. WW also have free advice (see tab) and the Cloud is another free place for getting a critique. Many people have found these very useful though, as I said on your other thread, this isn't the same as professional feedback. Having said that, many of the Cloudies are very astute and give excellent feedback. Good luck!
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by Squidge 8 months agoAlways put Eurythmics on when I need a good harmonising session! My mum used to tell me off for not singing in tune...but I remember days in our shared kitchen (2B or not 2B - that was the kitchen!) in Randall Lines, singing with two other friends, all taking a different line and belting the songs out!
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by Jen 8 months agoOhh, Ele, has your daughter just started school? did she like it? (must look for blog post on this!). yes, settled in fine and totally in love with the place :) At last I have a quiet place to write.. it's still in a dinning room but there is a little less foot traffic! So what are you doing on here?... get back to the writing!!! x
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by Tony 8 months agoSo glad 'little Ele' enjoyed her first day. Yes, thanks, my granddaughter had a good time, too. She seems to have gone around with two or three other girls - safety in numbers.
















